Thank God for Memories
A Senryu Poem11 total reviews
Comment from kmoss
Ahhh memories, huh? Those were the days. The single days when we wished we had someone and now all they do is nag. Hahahaha. I really like the picture you chose to pair with this and the title is great, since it's the opposite of the usual meaning. Well done.
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Ahhh memories, huh? Those were the days. The single days when we wished we had someone and now all they do is nag. Hahahaha. I really like the picture you chose to pair with this and the title is great, since it's the opposite of the usual meaning. Well done.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Thank God for Memories, presented as a 5-7-5, brings the happy couple in for a closer view where we see that marital bliss is blistering.
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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This senryu, Thank God for Memories, presented as a 5-7-5, brings the happy couple in for a closer view where we see that marital bliss is blistering.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Dr. Nad
You got me, from the first line I knew where you were going, then you didn't go there. You added intrigue to what could have been mundane. LOL I love it thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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You got me, from the first line I knew where you were going, then you didn't go there. You added intrigue to what could have been mundane. LOL I love it thanks for sharing. Embrace the love from above.
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Thank you very much, thought I would try humor
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It was my pleasure, you are most welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
You had better be prepared for stormy weather at your house if your wife sees this LOL All kidding aside, I do believe that our memories help us deal with what unpleasant things going on today by being able to remember something happy from the past.
Patty
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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You had better be prepared for stormy weather at your house if your wife sees this LOL All kidding aside, I do believe that our memories help us deal with what unpleasant things going on today by being able to remember something happy from the past.
Patty
Comment Written 02-May-2021
reply by the author on 02-May-2021
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Ha1 Ha!- not sure why I am laughing as I agree, yes it was a fun write
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good luck with that! LOL
Patty
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much irony in these words and you walking with your wife, yet your thoughts are of you being single, contrasting thoughts here . . . love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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There is much irony in these words and you walking with your wife, yet your thoughts are of you being single, contrasting thoughts here . . . love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Anne Johnston
"walking with my wife
reminds me of better times ~
when I was single"
This is a good entry for the contest, but I hope you don't really feel that way.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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"walking with my wife
reminds me of better times ~
when I was single"
This is a good entry for the contest, but I hope you don't really feel that way.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you very much, and of course not
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You are welcome
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well this is surely different in tone, Mystery Author. However, you did a good job with the contest prompt. I enjoyed reading your well thought out poem. It makes perfect sense describing the feelings this man has now that he is married. The art is a good pairing, too. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Well this is surely different in tone, Mystery Author. However, you did a good job with the contest prompt. I enjoyed reading your well thought out poem. It makes perfect sense describing the feelings this man has now that he is married. The art is a good pairing, too. Best wishes.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from equestrik
Well! This surprised me! I did not expect this as I looked at the picture first and found it to be really cool. The surprise of your words made me chuckle. Nice and clever writing.
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Well! This surprised me! I did not expect this as I looked at the picture first and found it to be really cool. The surprise of your words made me chuckle. Nice and clever writing.
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you very much
Comment from Bonnie Seach
Oh, so wry! Yet, true to life in its best forgotten moments. Why cry about it? Laughter has its healing balm. Nicely formatted and indeed satirical. Well done
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Oh, so wry! Yet, true to life in its best forgotten moments. Why cry about it? Laughter has its healing balm. Nicely formatted and indeed satirical. Well done
Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Wow! thank you for your very understanding review
Comment from Mazipoodles
Very funny and well written! Thanks for sharing this humorous piece - I enjoyed reading it. Lots of food for thought!. All the best in the contest.
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reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Very funny and well written! Thanks for sharing this humorous piece - I enjoyed reading it. Lots of food for thought!. All the best in the contest.
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Comment Written 01-May-2021
reply by the author on 01-May-2021
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Thank you very much