Cloud Pictures
On a perfect day, a front row seat -35 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Beautifully described! Enjoyed your artistic expression of seeing pictures in the clouds and all the ways the light and colors play in the mist. Congratulations on your well deserved win!!
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
Beautifully described! Enjoyed your artistic expression of seeing pictures in the clouds and all the ways the light and colors play in the mist. Congratulations on your well deserved win!!
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Hi Ivenochka,
Thank you thank you! I was so surprised by my win. I never thought I would for there were so many beautiful poems written.
Your kind words and super review and congratulations are humbly appreciated beyond measure!
Have a great week, Ivenochka,
Senyai
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Hi Ivenochka,
Thank you thank you! I was so surprised by my win. I never thought I would for there were so many beautiful poems written.
Your kind words and super review and congratulations are humbly appreciated beyond measure!
Have a great week, Ivenochka,
Senyai
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You're very welcome! I think most poets are nephophiles (lovers of clouds) so we could all relate to your poem!
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Thank you! ❤️
Comment from Katie Mae Dead
Congratulations on this stunning piece.
I remember you said you liked stream of consciousness poems and this is a stunning one!
I'd quote some favorite lines but there are so many.
Beautiful descriptors and well paced.
Great job!
Katiemae
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
Congratulations on this stunning piece.
I remember you said you liked stream of consciousness poems and this is a stunning one!
I'd quote some favorite lines but there are so many.
Beautiful descriptors and well paced.
Great job!
Katiemae
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Hi Katiemae,
Oh thank you so very much for your generous and super review and kind words on my Acrostic. I am so surprised I won, speechless actually. I had forgotten I had written it lol. I still can?t believe it.
I got home from watching the 4th?s fireworks on the 3rd 🙄 and settled into my caftan and some tea before bed and thought I?d read my FanStory messages for any new poems posted, when I saw it. You?d think I?d struck gold or something. It is an honor ?
Thanks again, Katiemae :-)
Have a great 4th!
Senyai
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 04-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2021
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Hi Contest Committee,
Thank you again! I am still so overwhelmed by this honor! I had absolutely no idea ?
I?m speechless. I humbly thank you ❤️
Senyai :-)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious. This may well be a winner--rich in stunning imagery--brilliant work in acrostic form--flows gracefully--not forced--ingenious word pictures!
pallets=>palettes
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
Glorious. This may well be a winner--rich in stunning imagery--brilliant work in acrostic form--flows gracefully--not forced--ingenious word pictures!
pallets=>palettes
Comment Written 01-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2021
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Hi Elizabeth,
You are the first person to catch my mistake with ?color pallets? instead or ?color palettes?!
I am forever indebted to you. I should have caught that myself :-(. I knew better, lol.
Thanks for being so perceptive and for writing such a glorious review.
Your diligence is quite appreciated!
Have a wonderful rest of your week,
Senyai
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You made my day! Thanks again for the nomination!
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You?re very welcome, Elizabeth
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
Senyai:
First, what a magnificent picture you have chosen to enhance your acrostic poem, Cloud Pictures. Your readers should be able to picture a beautiful cloud scene from the very descriptive words you've used in this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
Senyai:
First, what a magnificent picture you have chosen to enhance your acrostic poem, Cloud Pictures. Your readers should be able to picture a beautiful cloud scene from the very descriptive words you've used in this poem. Good luck in the contest.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi Rdfrdmom2,
Thanks so much for your kind comments and a super review on my little acrostic poem. Also I appreciate the well wishes!
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful photograph to accompany your beautiful acrostic poem. I traveled yesterday and I should have stopped to take a picture. The clouds you so eloquently describe in your poem, were like the vision in my car window.
I enjoyed reading. Well done.
Blessings
janet
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
A beautiful photograph to accompany your beautiful acrostic poem. I traveled yesterday and I should have stopped to take a picture. The clouds you so eloquently describe in your poem, were like the vision in my car window.
I enjoyed reading. Well done.
Blessings
janet
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi Janet,
Oh, you cloud gazed at some beautiful cumulus clouds? I love those too. To a fellow cloud gazer, I dedicate my acrostic poem, lol!
Thank you so much for an enjoyable and perceptive review. I appreciate your time to read my work.
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Janet,
Oh, you cloud gazed at some beautiful cumulus clouds? I love those too. To a fellow cloud gazer, I dedicate my acrostic poem, lol!
Thank you so much for an enjoyable and perceptive review. I appreciate your time to read my work.
Always,
Senyai
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a wonderful acrostic poem. The reason being you develop the "thesis" of the poem at an appropriate pace for the subject using just the right touch of literary devices to bring this free verse into clear view.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
This is a wonderful acrostic poem. The reason being you develop the "thesis" of the poem at an appropriate pace for the subject using just the right touch of literary devices to bring this free verse into clear view.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi Gloria,
Oh thank you for noticing my building up throughout my acrostic. Kinda like the building cumulus lol ?
Again thank you, dear Gloria. I always enjoy your perceptive and knowledgeable reviews and critiques. Means so much and I consider them valuable.
Have a great rest of tour week!
Senyai
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Hi Gloria,
Oh thank you for noticing my building up throughout my acrostic. Kinda like the building cumulus lol ?
Again thank you, dear Gloria. I always enjoy your perceptive and knowledgeable reviews and critiques. Means so much and I consider them valuable.
Have a great rest of tour week!
Senyai
Comment from estory
Nice job fitting into the acrostic, the long, languid lines smoothed out and softened the mood, and you had plenty of colorful images here of rainbow clouds drifting off in this vast expanse of possibilities, much like dreams. I like how you ended up with the word 'gifts'. estory
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
Nice job fitting into the acrostic, the long, languid lines smoothed out and softened the mood, and you had plenty of colorful images here of rainbow clouds drifting off in this vast expanse of possibilities, much like dreams. I like how you ended up with the word 'gifts'. estory
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi EStory,
I appreciate your perceptive and interesting review. Interesting comments as well ? reviews like these are such a treat!
Thank you!
Have a great rest of your week.
Senyai
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Hi EStory,
I appreciate your perceptive and interesting review. Interesting comments as well ? reviews like these are such a treat!
Thank you!
Have a great rest of your week.
Senyai
Comment from papa55mike
There is so much beauty that many people never slow down enough to see. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is amazing.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
There is so much beauty that many people never slow down enough to see. What a wonderfully written poem and the picture is amazing.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi Papa55Mike,
Thank you for a super review and comments. I appreciate your time to read and critique my acrostic entry.
Have a great rest of your week!
Senyai
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Hi Papa55Mike,
Thank you for a super review and comments. I appreciate your time to read and critique my acrostic entry.
Have a great rest of your week!
Senyai
Comment from harmony13
A lovely description of the clouds! The author's words are engaging,
interesting, colorful and creative. I pondered on these words as I often
like to look and guess the symbolism in the clouds! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect! Have a great day!....Maria
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
A lovely description of the clouds! The author's words are engaging,
interesting, colorful and creative. I pondered on these words as I often
like to look and guess the symbolism in the clouds! The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect! Have a great day!....Maria
Comment Written 30-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2021
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Hi Maria,
Oh thank you for such a sweet and perceptive review and comments!
I appreciate your time to read and critique my little acrostic! To a fellow cloud gazer, I do love cumulus as they make excellent cloud pictures ?
Again your time a appreciated to read and comment on my little poem.
Always,
Senyai
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Hi Maria,
Oh thank you for such a sweet and perceptive review and comments!
I appreciate your time to read and critique my little acrostic! To a fellow cloud gazer, I do love cumulus as they make excellent cloud pictures ?
Again your time a appreciated to read and comment on my little poem.
Always,
Senyai