Brian's book of poem's
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Comment from Eternal Muse
Thank you for posting this for the 6 word contest. Your statement, while being 6 words, doesn't present a story, it's just a mere statement. In my humble opinion you should expand it.
Example (this is just a suggestion which you could disregard in its entirety):
Church bells rang for my Mom
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Thank you for posting this for the 6 word contest. Your statement, while being 6 words, doesn't present a story, it's just a mere statement. In my humble opinion you should expand it.
Example (this is just a suggestion which you could disregard in its entirety):
Church bells rang for my Mom
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021
Comment from mermaids
Excellent one line poem that is faith based in nature. It is not easy to write a one line poem with meaning but you created one. Church bells deserve a poem. Best wishes for this unique contest.
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Excellent one line poem that is faith based in nature. It is not easy to write a one line poem with meaning but you created one. Church bells deserve a poem. Best wishes for this unique contest.
Comment Written 04-Oct-2021