Brian's book of poem's
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Comment from Livia Lynch
Maybe something better?
I love this poem, I love the confusion that comes across. I believe you did a very good job!
Hope you are having a wonderful day :)
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Maybe something better?
I love this poem, I love the confusion that comes across. I believe you did a very good job!
Hope you are having a wonderful day :)
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You sure have feelings brought to core in this sentence....the past has many things which need improvement; that is why we learn from our mistakes; and we sure don't need other people to keep reminding us either. The repeating is getting a little annoying.
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You sure have feelings brought to core in this sentence....the past has many things which need improvement; that is why we learn from our mistakes; and we sure don't need other people to keep reminding us either. The repeating is getting a little annoying.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021