Ghost Pandemic Country
A country gone to the ghosts.3 total reviews
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I don't think the US has been a proud, strong country for quite a while now but that's another story!
There's certainly a lot of pandemic ghosts kicking about though.
All the best in the judging / voting.
GMG
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Hi there,
I don't think the US has been a proud, strong country for quite a while now but that's another story!
There's certainly a lot of pandemic ghosts kicking about though.
All the best in the judging / voting.
GMG
Comment Written 28-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You met all the requirements of the challenge. Bravo. That is worth five stars alone. The fabric of the message also stands tall.
The poser of it all is how are critiquers expected to write 150 characters for a 27-word piece????
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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You met all the requirements of the challenge. Bravo. That is worth five stars alone. The fabric of the message also stands tall.
The poser of it all is how are critiquers expected to write 150 characters for a 27-word piece????
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022
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Thank you! You have made my day! God bless you!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry has a good beginning that is well expressed. It is current too. You have included you 27 words up from 18.
I will return to see if revisions are made.
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Revised rating of 5 from the first one of 4.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Your contest entry has a good beginning that is well expressed. It is current too. You have included you 27 words up from 18.
I will return to see if revisions are made.
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Revised rating of 5 from the first one of 4.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 23-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2022
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Thank you! I have made the revisions. Does it sound better now?