Love never had Holes
A two line poem18 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
I relate to this. Biscuits and gravy. Cornbread and milk. Beautiful quilts made by Grandma. Buttermilk sitting around the pot-bellied stove. Towels from flour sacks with handmade embroidery. Home made curtains. Oh, yes, I relate. Thank you for the wonderful moments, remembering the great times in my life.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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I relate to this. Biscuits and gravy. Cornbread and milk. Beautiful quilts made by Grandma. Buttermilk sitting around the pot-bellied stove. Towels from flour sacks with handmade embroidery. Home made curtains. Oh, yes, I relate. Thank you for the wonderful moments, remembering the great times in my life.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much, I loved all those things that Mum made, they lasted so long, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
How true this is but I don't see why dripping was written singularly. I feel an added ess would be more fine. 'drippings' ................................................................................
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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How true this is but I don't see why dripping was written singularly. I feel an added ess would be more fine. 'drippings' ................................................................................
Comment Written 12-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, I am not quite sure what you mean by ess? as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your poem. I appreciate your comments and explanations at the bottom of page. You did a nice job with the prompt. This is a good entry for the contest, good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I appreciate your comments and explanations at the bottom of page. You did a nice job with the prompt. This is a good entry for the contest, good luck.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, childhood memories are a great inspiration, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Yes, this is an excellent entry for the - Two Line Poem - contest.
I think this is a winner. Not sure what I'm going to enter now, if at all. The brevity of this piece states so much. Perfect internal and end rhyme and love the photo. I can't help but shower you with a six. :-) ~DD
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Yes, this is an excellent entry for the - Two Line Poem - contest.
I think this is a winner. Not sure what I'm going to enter now, if at all. The brevity of this piece states so much. Perfect internal and end rhyme and love the photo. I can't help but shower you with a six. :-) ~DD
Comment Written 10-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2022
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Wow! so many thanks for this very understanding review and comments, I know your entry will stand against any submitted, I look forward to reading, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This two-line essence poem, Love Always Fulfilled, has the proper formatting and sends us back to those days when our moms did it all. They still do it all, but few still make their clothes. Neat poem.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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This two-line essence poem, Love Always Fulfilled, has the proper formatting and sends us back to those days when our moms did it all. They still do it all, but few still make their clothes. Neat poem.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Bill, yes weren't and aren't they wonderful, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Janetsue
I am glad you have shared a bit of your upbringing. There are so many memories in our lives...some good and some not so good. You have expressed yourself well in this Two Line poetry entry. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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I am glad you have shared a bit of your upbringing. There are so many memories in our lives...some good and some not so good. You have expressed yourself well in this Two Line poetry entry. Best wishes!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much, bit of a challenge these little works, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
You have captured those times (the fifties, and probably late forties) with your two line poem. Absolutely brought back so many memories. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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You have captured those times (the fifties, and probably late forties) with your two line poem. Absolutely brought back so many memories. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much, yes memories, this was a fun challenge, very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
My Mother was from Lancashire and they would live on bread and dripping. My Mother, however would not have lard in the house! She never fried anything on her stove and it was spotless, everyone had to be boiled! Your words made me smile, it is as if my Mother said them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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My Mother was from Lancashire and they would live on bread and dripping. My Mother, however would not have lard in the house! She never fried anything on her stove and it was spotless, everyone had to be boiled! Your words made me smile, it is as if my Mother said them, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, my Mom did use hers an old wood fired one, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good, along with the rhyme.
-I like how you tell a story with a few words,
showing how you were raised and what
your mother did for the family.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation, kahpot.
-Thanks for sharing the notes.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-The syllable count is good, along with the rhyme.
-I like how you tell a story with a few words,
showing how you were raised and what
your mother did for the family.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much, yes Parents do an amazing job with very little sometimes, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are welcome, kahpot, and I agree. I never realized the extent of what my parents had done until I was an adult. You are very welcome for the review.
Comment from June Sargent
Sustenance and covering - supplied with love. What more do we need? Simple things that cocoon us with love as we were growing up. Kids today do not appreciate these simpler things - a generation that demands much more than what they need. I fear for them.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Sustenance and covering - supplied with love. What more do we need? Simple things that cocoon us with love as we were growing up. Kids today do not appreciate these simpler things - a generation that demands much more than what they need. I fear for them.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you, and yes love can fill the emptiness of most anything, and yes the kids of today are somewhat better off yet spoiled, as always very much appreciated****kahpot