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See you later...NOT!6 total reviews
Comment from Thatguypk
A great piece of writing about the toxicity of a broken trust. I can really feel the pain and disappointment emanating from your verse. Good luck in the contest.
PK
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
A great piece of writing about the toxicity of a broken trust. I can really feel the pain and disappointment emanating from your verse. Good luck in the contest.
PK
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Glad you're gone! writing prompt contest. Good form.
The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
Excellent entry for the Glad you're gone! writing prompt contest. Good form.
The rhymes do not seem forced and your poem flows well. It draws upon emotions and it presents strong images.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for reading my poem. :)
Comment from kahpot
I would have to say that after all they seemed to have put you through it would be a blessing they are no longer around, an excellent read, poem, and entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
I would have to say that after all they seemed to have put you through it would be a blessing they are no longer around, an excellent read, poem, and entry for this prompt, best wishes****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this thoughtful review. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow! This is so dark and I am loving it! Sometimes people break and unfortunately don't put themselves back together. This is a nitty gritty sad truth if life. Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
Wow! This is so dark and I am loving it! Sometimes people break and unfortunately don't put themselves back together. This is a nitty gritty sad truth if life. Well done!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you this tremendous review, it's awesome. :)
Comment from Tom Horonzy
How sad. I hope not a real life experience. Be well; or be better. .........................................................................................................................................................
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
How sad. I hope not a real life experience. Be well; or be better. .........................................................................................................................................................
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thanks.
Comment from jessizero
I like your imagery in this poem. It seemed sad and angry all at once. You did a good job with the prompt. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
I like your imagery in this poem. It seemed sad and angry all at once. You did a good job with the prompt. Thank you for sharing. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for your encouraging words, they mean a lot. :)