A Winter's Rest
a 5-7-57 total reviews
Comment from Faith Williams
I really enjoyed this piece. What lovely imagery you paint. I find it difficult to think of winter during summer. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I really enjoyed this piece. What lovely imagery you paint. I find it difficult to think of winter during summer. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you Faith!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a lovely poem. The syllable count is on point. The poem's font is large enough to be read easily. I like that it is centered under the graphic. I would probably make the font a color in the visual, maybe a shade of purple. The visual fits the poem well. Well-written, well-presented so Well-done! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely poem. The syllable count is on point. The poem's font is large enough to be read easily. I like that it is centered under the graphic. I would probably make the font a color in the visual, maybe a shade of purple. The visual fits the poem well. Well-written, well-presented so Well-done! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Sandra!!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I enjoyed this writing. A well done writing . You give your reader, a beautiful and peaceful image of winter's snow.
Thank you for the read
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I enjoyed this writing. A well done writing . You give your reader, a beautiful and peaceful image of winter's snow.
Thank you for the read
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thank you Mary!
Comment from RodG
I really like this ode to Winter because
(1) it captures the mood of the photograph.
(2) it personifies the earth sleeping gently and uses a snug blanket as a metaphor for snow
(3) of its use of alliteration
Rod
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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I really like this ode to Winter because
(1) it captures the mood of the photograph.
(2) it personifies the earth sleeping gently and uses a snug blanket as a metaphor for snow
(3) of its use of alliteration
Rod
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Rod!!
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
This is a lovely poem giving a perfect essence to the season of winter. Not a bad choice as it is in the nineties here and cool thoughts help. The picture and the haiku are quite wonderful.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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This is a lovely poem giving a perfect essence to the season of winter. Not a bad choice as it is in the nineties here and cool thoughts help. The picture and the haiku are quite wonderful.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Carol!!!!
Comment from kahpot
Excellent, a wonderful ode to winter, winter is a beautiful though cold season, your words make it seem so serene, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Excellent, a wonderful ode to winter, winter is a beautiful though cold season, your words make it seem so serene, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much Kim.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes indeed, thanks to winter the ground can sleep, or rest in fallowness if you like, this is beautifully written, I love the idea of the ground hibernating, rest under a blanket of snow, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Oh yes indeed, thanks to winter the ground can sleep, or rest in fallowness if you like, this is beautifully written, I love the idea of the ground hibernating, rest under a blanket of snow, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much, Roy!!
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a pleasure