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Comment from
Lloyd T. Okoko
Congratulations for posting a work that falls in tandem with the specified entry requirements of the writing prompt.
The work specified being acrostic poem compliant. And you no doubt did justice to it.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 20-Jun-2022
Comment from
robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
I like your message - a lot. If you can't be comfortable with yourself - life becomes so much more complicated and difficult, right? You must learn to love yourself before you can ever learn to learn someone else.
The only problem I see is that this contest REQUIRES rhyming and your poem has none. I strongly suggest a heavy edit before the judging begins. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 20-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2022
Thank you! I made the lines rhyme. It is fixed. Is it now good enough for a five stars rating? Please check.
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