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Dreams do come true
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Comment from
Frank Malley
"Dream Lady" is a poem about the discovery of love within the narrator's life. It's written contemporary American English, and perhaps lacks the wording that could exemplify, could show rather than tell, about real passion. Singular descriptions create singular reactions; general statements are the stuff of Reader's Digest; not bad, but not too rousing.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
thanks for the frank critique
reply by Frank Malley on 17-Aug-2022
I like the English romantic poetry of the 17th and 18th Centuries, and there's lots of newer and older great love poetry as well.
Comment from
leather
No spelling errors were noted.
It seems that the first stanza is stronger than the second--it reads smoother. Still, overall, a lovely poem.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2022
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