Kiss
They are special.4 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Poet, you have 2 votes now!
I like your word choice for this romance contest.
Smooching looks fun, two tongues swooshing. You kept your kiss light nevertheless I did find your words captivating. The second line is my favourite.
Stay safe!
I like the the colour scheme and the pic enhances your words.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
Ciao Poet, you have 2 votes now!
I like your word choice for this romance contest.
Smooching looks fun, two tongues swooshing. You kept your kiss light nevertheless I did find your words captivating. The second line is my favourite.
Stay safe!
I like the the colour scheme and the pic enhances your words.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Thanks!
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I didn't know two tongues swoosh.
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A french kiss ..I read it in a couple of romance stories ( biggrin).
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We usually do not do it that.
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OH,really?
Who is "WE" ... Americans?
I thought everyone in love dips his/her tongue into their lover's mouth and then they swoosh. (biggrin)
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My husband and ,I
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Okay.
Changing subject..I'm looking forward to autumn, my favourite season.
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Ok
Comment from Gunner Lil
You hit it just right. A lot said with a very few words. A great photo that you used also.
Gave my first kiss in the first grade
Good luck in the contest.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
You hit it just right. A lot said with a very few words. A great photo that you used also.
Gave my first kiss in the first grade
Good luck in the contest.
Thank you.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2022
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Welcome.
Comment from jessizero
It is romantic that the kisses are all special time after time. You did a great job with the acrostic format. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
It is romantic that the kisses are all special time after time. You did a great job with the acrostic format. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Fleedleflump
Mmm, lips sliding across lips, synchronised motion, erogenous dancing while breath tangles, tongues aching to tickle one another, and desperate dance of passion.
Why do I think about these things when I'm on the train? Lol
Mike
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
Mmm, lips sliding across lips, synchronised motion, erogenous dancing while breath tangles, tongues aching to tickle one another, and desperate dance of passion.
Why do I think about these things when I'm on the train? Lol
Mike
Comment Written 17-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2022
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Thanks