Physical Jerks
A keep fit session5 total reviews
Comment from mrsmajor
I like this one, the ideas are true, and your rhymes are great...Yep that sounds like a get fit session to me...without a doubt...God luck in the contest, this is a good entry..to me!
Warmly,
Victoria
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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I like this one, the ideas are true, and your rhymes are great...Yep that sounds like a get fit session to me...without a doubt...God luck in the contest, this is a good entry..to me!
Warmly,
Victoria
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you
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You're very welcome!
Comment from BermyBye50
This is an excellent entry for the Rhyme It contest. Your imagery is spot on as it paint a perfect picture of a workout in the gym. Well done.
Good luck in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the Rhyme It contest. Your imagery is spot on as it paint a perfect picture of a workout in the gym. Well done.
Good luck in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Regina Elliott
A stellar contender here. I can't exercise in late afternoon or evening, it would
keep me up. Anyway, I
appreciate the humor, my
very best wishes for the contest, and happy weekend.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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A stellar contender here. I can't exercise in late afternoon or evening, it would
keep me up. Anyway, I
appreciate the humor, my
very best wishes for the contest, and happy weekend.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Exerciser,
hahahaha! Sounds like you are thoroughly enjoying these work-out moments. But I think there's every good chance your teacher is faking it, too. I mean, who REALLY loves that stuff? It's just the feelings afterward that are treasured... whew. Thanks!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Dear Mystery Exerciser,
hahahaha! Sounds like you are thoroughly enjoying these work-out moments. But I think there's every good chance your teacher is faking it, too. I mean, who REALLY loves that stuff? It's just the feelings afterward that are treasured... whew. Thanks!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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I don't know. My teacher has a permanent smile on her face. She is very cheery. Anyway, thank you very much for your kind review.
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Yeah, that'll get those endorphins flowing, alright. Great poem. I could almost feel the workout as you described it. Good writing. Nice rhyming and meter.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Yeah, that'll get those endorphins flowing, alright. Great poem. I could almost feel the workout as you described it. Good writing. Nice rhyming and meter.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind review.