Hurry Back, She's Gone
Where, oh, where?3 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a good 3-5-3 poem. The text can be clearly seen. The message is clearly presented. I know the feeling. I too have this struggle at times. The visual fits well, but it suggests perhaps another activity. lol Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
This is a good 3-5-3 poem. The text can be clearly seen. The message is clearly presented. I know the feeling. I too have this struggle at times. The visual fits well, but it suggests perhaps another activity. lol Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yes, being without your muse is upsetting to
many writers. Your contest entry read well,
Mystery Author. Great syllable count per line
and a great message expressed in 11 syllables.
The image was a perfect addition.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
Yes, being without your muse is upsetting to
many writers. Your contest entry read well,
Mystery Author. Great syllable count per line
and a great message expressed in 11 syllables.
The image was a perfect addition.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review!
Comment from Thomas Blanks
When my muse leaves, it is usually only for a trip to Dunkin Donuts for a tall coffee with cream and sugar in the morning. If that's not where she is, she is in a tall bottle of Mountain Dew Zero Sugar in the evening.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
When my muse leaves, it is usually only for a trip to Dunkin Donuts for a tall coffee with cream and sugar in the morning. If that's not where she is, she is in a tall bottle of Mountain Dew Zero Sugar in the evening.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2022
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Thank you for your kind review! I have enjoyed your humor story. It is interesting. Muse can come from anywhere.