Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I understood your plea perfectly, Mystery Author.
Your words flowed smoothly with great rhymes
and imagery. The picture was perfect. I could see
the man thinking/saying this and praying she said
yes.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

Thank you for your excellent review!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very nice and well written romantic Diatelle poem you have penned for the writing prompt entry. You used very good descriptive words that went well with your imagery! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

Thank you so much! It's appreciated!

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I saw this contest and wondered about it - didn't do much more than that, lol! It seems challenging - matching the syllable count with the rhyme pattern. But you appear to have done a marvelous job with it, and I love the shape that it takes when it is centered on the page.

A beautiful love poem. Well executed! Good luck:-)

Pam

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2022

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022

Thank you for your kind review! I hope I win.