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Unattached

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6 total reviews 
Comment from Mario PIERRE
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These few words are enough to create an atmosphere of horror and a hair-raising moment. The great short poems like the 5-7-5 are tjose which can create a picture and an atmosphere in the readers' mind. Yours does this!!
Great piece!

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
    Thank you, that's very nice if you. I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Wonderful entry for the 5-7-5 Horror writing prompt contest.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.

I like the imagery and presentation.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
    Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from lancellot
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The bloody hand crept
Where the woman soundly slept
To her throat...it leapt!

-Perfect syllable count for each line, and you went the extra mile with the end rhymes. Great visuals, and having the victim be a woman, adds to the sense of vulnerability and horror. Good presentation too.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
    Thanks so much. :)
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Wow, I am usually not a fan of horror stories, but this one is very intriguing and most creative. You have so few words to work with, but you have managed to tell a compelling story. Very well done. Terry.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2022
    Thank you, this great review means a lot to me. :)
Comment from Ricky1024
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"Unattached" was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Good luck with your contest Entry.
Doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
    Thank you for this nice review. :)
Comment from jessizero
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Yes, that is a scary mental image! I will try not to think of that when I try to go to sleep tonight. The picture you provided helped make it horrific. Thanks for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2022


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2022
    Thanks so much for this terrific review. :)