Acrostic (a little boy found)
A Site Contest Entry15 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, A LITTLE BOY FOUND, has the proper formatting and tells the story of an abandoned child's rescue saving two lives --Mother and child.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This acrostic poem, A LITTLE BOY FOUND, has the proper formatting and tells the story of an abandoned child's rescue saving two lives --Mother and child.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wonderful poem entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. Good form, you followed the rules well.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Goodluck!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Wonderful poem entry for the Acrostic Poetry Contest. Good form, you followed the rules well.
I love the imagery and presentation.
Goodluck!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
I think when God gives a young life to nurture and sustain, it is singularly the best gift that can be given, because our lives are so short, the only way to lengthen them is to leave a legacy of love. This is a beautifully written acrostic my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I think when God gives a young life to nurture and sustain, it is singularly the best gift that can be given, because our lives are so short, the only way to lengthen them is to leave a legacy of love. This is a beautifully written acrostic my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you Roy, yes, it is good to hear some good news these days, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Well done
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done acrostic poem - I like the format, and the theme, that something good can come out of something bad, that a child being abandoned at birth can bring so much joy to those who find and raise him.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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nicely done acrostic poem - I like the format, and the theme, that something good can come out of something bad, that a child being abandoned at birth can bring so much joy to those who find and raise him.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, yes a wonderful outcome, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your acrostic for the contest,
Kahpot. I enjoyed reading it, though it was poignant.
I'm happy the little baby and the woman who found
him both got a second chance at life. Your color scheme
and use of rhyme worked well. Many acrostics read as a list.
However, yours told a story, and the rhymes were an added
bonus.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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You did a great job with your acrostic for the contest,
Kahpot. I enjoyed reading it, though it was poignant.
I'm happy the little baby and the woman who found
him both got a second chance at life. Your color scheme
and use of rhyme worked well. Many acrostics read as a list.
However, yours told a story, and the rhymes were an added
bonus.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you Jan, yes, I thought I would try rhyme after you helped me, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
What a beautiful story! So a woman adopted an abandoned baby boy and in giving love to this boy she found joy in life. I wasn't sure about the last stanza but does it mean that the baby was really her son?
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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What a beautiful story! So a woman adopted an abandoned baby boy and in giving love to this boy she found joy in life. I wasn't sure about the last stanza but does it mean that the baby was really her son?
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, no the court decided that the maternal mother was not fit, so boy got to live with the only mother he knew, though it started illegally, she won the right to adopt, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Very good! I'm glad the one who behaved like a mother was awarded the honor!
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a fine acrostic telling the story of two lives meeting in a moment of sadness and which brought light to both.
Very well done, and I wish you great luck with the voters. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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This is a fine acrostic telling the story of two lives meeting in a moment of sadness and which brought light to both.
Very well done, and I wish you great luck with the voters. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a little boy found his saviour here and was finally looked after and I enjoyed your endearing acrostic and wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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This sounds like a little boy found his saviour here and was finally looked after and I enjoyed your endearing acrostic and wish you luck with the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well done! You told a heartbreaking story in an acrostic poem and you told it well! This is a great way to tell us about an issue that needs to be brought to our attention. The lost children of the world need love and support from whoever comes along to find them.
You have written a meaningful piece and I applaud you!
Jesse
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Well done! You told a heartbreaking story in an acrostic poem and you told it well! This is a great way to tell us about an issue that needs to be brought to our attention. The lost children of the world need love and support from whoever comes along to find them.
You have written a meaningful piece and I applaud you!
Jesse
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you Jesse, I am learning with your and others help, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Dang. I wish I could reason what you wrote. It's strange. Maybe, a cup of Jo would waken me to read a second time. Oops, I don't drink coffee. Moving on. I get the acrostics, but the story leaves me baffled. Mea culpa, please.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Dang. I wish I could reason what you wrote. It's strange. Maybe, a cup of Jo would waken me to read a second time. Oops, I don't drink coffee. Moving on. I get the acrostics, but the story leaves me baffled. Mea culpa, please.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Many thanks, each to their own my friend, as always very much appreciated****kahpot