How About You
A 3-Line Poem19 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, that happens to me too. Maybe my mind is too simple. But you have made a humorous and witty three line poem from it - well done. Best wishes for the contest. Your piece will make everyone think!
Wendy
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Yes, that happens to me too. Maybe my mind is too simple. But you have made a humorous and witty three line poem from it - well done. Best wishes for the contest. Your piece will make everyone think!
Wendy
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from jake cosmos aller
i like this short and snarky poem about the adage read between the lines which sounds good but is difficult for many people to really comprehend or follow particularly those people who are literal minded
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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i like this short and snarky poem about the adage read between the lines which sounds good but is difficult for many people to really comprehend or follow particularly those people who are literal minded
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, I am glad you see "snarky" here, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
This is very well done, kahpot. Succinct, visual and a great closing line.
I think you might have the winner here, so I am more than happy to give you my last six star of the week.
Best of luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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This is very well done, kahpot. Succinct, visual and a great closing line.
I think you might have the winner here, so I am more than happy to give you my last six star of the week.
Best of luck with the Contest Committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Wow! Thank you so very much, your encouragement and wonderful stars are an honer, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Haha, I see nothing between the lines. I know that's
the way you intended it, Kahpot. What a creative
contest entry. You presented this perfectly with the
color scheme and your perfect word choices.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Haha, I see nothing between the lines. I know that's
the way you intended it, Kahpot. What a creative
contest entry. You presented this perfectly with the
color scheme and your perfect word choices.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, just a thought I had while practicing my prose, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Read between the lines seems very relevant to the story. It makes the imagination go wild wondering what has been said that I am not seeing. This is very intriguing and makes the poem all the more enticing. Super job!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Read between the lines seems very relevant to the story. It makes the imagination go wild wondering what has been said that I am not seeing. This is very intriguing and makes the poem all the more enticing. Super job!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so very much for your encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from mermaids
I can relate to your words. I often attempt to read between the lines but not come up with anything. Excellent theme for a poem that many can relate to.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I can relate to your words. I often attempt to read between the lines but not come up with anything. Excellent theme for a poem that many can relate to.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you, yes I have the same problem, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from lyenochka
I love it! This could be the winner as you summarized the difficulty of poetry interpretation so humorously and honestly. Sometimes, we do completely come up blank. This is a nice word play, too because between the lines are blank lines! Hope this does well in the contest!!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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I love it! This could be the winner as you summarized the difficulty of poetry interpretation so humorously and honestly. Sometimes, we do completely come up blank. This is a nice word play, too because between the lines are blank lines! Hope this does well in the contest!!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, believe it or not, I was trying to write some more prose when BLANK! oh well, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Oh, I can understand it happens with prose, too. There is a "purple prose" which uses a lot of poetic devices that could make it hard to understand.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest .
I like the simple but nice presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 3 Line Poetry Contest .
I like the simple but nice presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Goodluck
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, LOL. Some things in life will always remain a mystery. Good three-line poem. You made me laugh and gave me something to think about. Of special note: Yet still come up blank. I like the white fonts on the black background--if only life could be as simple as black or white?
It's all the shades in between that make it complicated. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Hello Kahpot, LOL. Some things in life will always remain a mystery. Good three-line poem. You made me laugh and gave me something to think about. Of special note: Yet still come up blank. I like the white fonts on the black background--if only life could be as simple as black or white?
It's all the shades in between that make it complicated. Well done. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much, it would be nice if things were so simple, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jamison Brown
Yeah, me too. This is an excellent haiku, which vividly expresses what a lot of us feel every day. I have recently spent some time studying this format and your post checks all the boxes. Well done, my friend. - Jamison
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Yeah, me too. This is an excellent haiku, which vividly expresses what a lot of us feel every day. I have recently spent some time studying this format and your post checks all the boxes. Well done, my friend. - Jamison
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you Jamison, Yes, with so many forms it takes a while, as always very much appreciated****kahpot