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Comment from Dr. Nad
Exceptional
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Your creativity is once again on display with this birthday greeting to one of your many friends and FanStory. I believe you have been bushwhacked by the beauty you see in people. Never allowed negativity of the naysayers to squelch the compassionate gift that oozes out of you.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
    You my dear brother are too sweet for words and wish I deserved all the nice things you say, but I thank you from the bottom of my heart. You are the best. Thank you once again for the awesome six stars .
reply by Dr. Nad on 18-Jun-2023
    My prayer for continued blessings on you and your continued healing. My prayer is that you will be emotionally prepared for the next round of surgery, and then healing following that.
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi,
Yet another another good birthday poem. It think this is the first time you were late. You are right about her.
Keep writing and stay healthy .
Joan

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from MissMerri
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I love that you so cleverly acknowledge your friends this way. Your birthday poems are always fun and revealing too. I like to learn more about FanStory friends. Thank you for doing this. This poem is clever and cute and a fun one to read.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from Calene
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Awwwww! This poem is so sweet. I love the unique format that this has, and how it fits together. I'm not sure what your relation is to Valda, but I'm sure she's lucky to have you.

~Calene

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

Comment from Janet Foor
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Very nice and sweet birthday poem for Valda. She must be thrilled to be remembered in such a thoughtful way.
She does write beautiful poems.
Thank you for sharing.
Blessings
J

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023

Comment from karenina
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Happy belated birthday to Valda! You seem to have taken up the challenge of birthday greetings for FanStory members, and I, for one, don't know how you (or Helen!) keep up with them all!

Your "Merry-go-Rhyme" is fun to read... Hope you had a great visit with your siblings and I'll bet Valda was pleased as punch to see this poem even if it was a day or so late!

Karenina

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    Hi there my sweet Thelma! I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
    I will be in touch soon!
reply by karenina on 29-Apr-2023
    No worries... I know you're busy as a bee all the time!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, A Slightly Belated Birthday Wish, is a nice thing to send up for Valda. I just finished one of latest poem and wasn't aware of this milestone. It's neat.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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I can't imagine why you skipped something, after all you don't have much going on in your day. bwaaa When we have the date of our birth pass, we are still eligible for good wishes, prayers and good energy sent out way. So now we can all shower Valda with blessings & all good things.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    Hi Liz, I am so happy to finally get a chance to thank you for all the reviews you have done for me. I will get to your other ones soon, but for here I just want to thank you so much for your kind words for Valda. She wasn't worried one way or another, but it was more that I felt bad that I was doing it a day late.
    I also have been feeling bad that in Feb when I think that is your month, I wasn't able to do them, so am thinking that one of these days I will surprise you with a non-birthday one. I am trying to say thank you to all the friends that have been so good to me with reviews and everything, as I haven't been able to review much. I know I told you a long time ago that I would be having surgery on both eyes, in June, so praying that it works. Thanks again my dear friend.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 29-Apr-2023
    You make me smile
Comment from Paul McFarland
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You are the birthday girl, Debi. You must have a special file for those birthdays. You seem to be always thinking of others. Hope your health is improving.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    Hi Paul, I thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem for Valda. They are so appreciated, my dear friend!
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
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This was a very thoughtful and nice poem. It's one thing to give a mere gift of material items or money. But a gift of poetry is one from the heart and I hope yours will be treasured by its intended recipient.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
    Thank you so much for your very kind review and words for my poem. They are so appreciated, by Valda and myself.