The Fall
Original sin.2 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You did a great job with this acrostic poem inspired by the Bible. The beginning letter of each line leads us into the story of man's fall from grace. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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You did a great job with this acrostic poem inspired by the Bible. The beginning letter of each line leads us into the story of man's fall from grace. Nicely done.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Thank you my friend. I liked it. Appreciate you!
Comment from Aaron Milavec
Great illustration and nice poem.
I'm puzzled with this line: "Serpent inflames our carnal desires."
Did you mean to say, "Serpent inflames their carnal desires"?
If so, then how are carnal desires attached to the eating of the fruit?
If not, how does the Serpent inflame our canal desires?
Please help me to understand.
In lust we grew? How so? Who is the "we" here? I'm confused.
Aaron
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Great illustration and nice poem.
I'm puzzled with this line: "Serpent inflames our carnal desires."
Did you mean to say, "Serpent inflames their carnal desires"?
If so, then how are carnal desires attached to the eating of the fruit?
If not, how does the Serpent inflame our canal desires?
Please help me to understand.
In lust we grew? How so? Who is the "we" here? I'm confused.
Aaron
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Read Genesis. Eating of of the fruit led to Adam and Eve knowing that they were naked thus they hid from God and were ashamed. This led to ejection from the garden and childbirth for women. The ?we?s? are mankind which you and I ?us? are part of.
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