True Colors
ABC poem entry5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my, a little deceit here from this otherwise gentleman. I enjoyed reading this contest. It begs us to look deeper. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
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Oh my, a little deceit here from this otherwise gentleman. I enjoyed reading this contest. It begs us to look deeper. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have woven an insightful image of the threads that bind us, divinely created. And yet, they deteriorate with each act of greed or cruelty that occurs in our world. How this must sadden the maker.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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You have woven an insightful image of the threads that bind us, divinely created. And yet, they deteriorate with each act of greed or cruelty that occurs in our world. How this must sadden the maker.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts. You clearly understand what I was trying to express. Your feedback is much appreciated, as always.
Comment from tfawcus
What a fine metaphor this makes. So delicate, so fragile, so easy to destroy. We should be paying more attention to this web than the world wide one.
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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What a fine metaphor this makes. So delicate, so fragile, so easy to destroy. We should be paying more attention to this web than the world wide one.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2023
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Thank you for sharing your insightful thoughts. You clearly understand what I was trying to express. Your feedback is much appreciated, as always.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely done ABC poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a very happy new year and may your year be blessed. Patricia.
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This is a nicely done ABC poem for the contest, and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a very happy new year and may your year be blessed. Patricia.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of the more difficult letters for your ABC poem to give us this social commentary. I like how you start with the simple spider web and move us to the web of the Internet. Best wishes in the contest!
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Great use of the more difficult letters for your ABC poem to give us this social commentary. I like how you start with the simple spider web and move us to the web of the Internet. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2023