2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from Mark Schardine
Raely does a Haiku poem have such a strong message. It appeals to the senses, and reminds of the joys that life offers us. A short poem often expresses ideas much better than a long one.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Raely does a Haiku poem have such a strong message. It appeals to the senses, and reminds of the joys that life offers us. A short poem often expresses ideas much better than a long one.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
There is something very sensual about a plum. Like a fruit used for sedction. Lol. Maybe that's just me. Your poem put the reader in the moment when senses were awakened. Great poem. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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There is something very sensual about a plum. Like a fruit used for sedction. Lol. Maybe that's just me. Your poem put the reader in the moment when senses were awakened. Great poem. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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I agree with you, the juice running down your face, the sweetness.. I'm worse than you LoL
Thank you, Gretchen.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing beautiful poem with us. I enjoyed the alliteration with the 'Plump Plums'. That's a mouthful. LOL Once again, you have presented a wonderful presentation.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you for sharing beautiful poem with us. I enjoyed the alliteration with the 'Plump Plums'. That's a mouthful. LOL Once again, you have presented a wonderful presentation.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara.
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Comment from shelley kaye
lol. nice one!
don't care for plums, but this has cool imagery
smooth flow of words provoking thought...
does she have two different shades of purple nail polish? my daughter does that - every nail a different colour lol!
anyway, great haiku - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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lol. nice one!
don't care for plums, but this has cool imagery
smooth flow of words provoking thought...
does she have two different shades of purple nail polish? my daughter does that - every nail a different colour lol!
anyway, great haiku - thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Shelley.
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Comment from Julie Helms
I happen to LOVE plums and the juice always runs down my chin. Your picture directs it to a sexy feeling, but the haiku alone makes me think of laughing together at the stickiness. More joyful than sexy. I really want a plum now. :-)
Beautiful poem and presentation!
Julie
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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I happen to LOVE plums and the juice always runs down my chin. Your picture directs it to a sexy feeling, but the haiku alone makes me think of laughing together at the stickiness. More joyful than sexy. I really want a plum now. :-)
Beautiful poem and presentation!
Julie
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Julie.
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Comment from lyenochka
I guess the lips are quite plump (hopefully not due to injections) and plum-colored due to the right lipstick. It's good that the lovers can enjoy each other's sweetness.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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I guess the lips are quite plump (hopefully not due to injections) and plum-colored due to the right lipstick. It's good that the lovers can enjoy each other's sweetness.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2024
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hehe ... i don't like the fake plump lips. I was thinking of normal plump lips and ofcourse, a play on words.
thank you, sis.
love,
marival