2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from Mark Schardine
The siren and her song can express for love for a man, even a desire to save him. Wisdom consists of listening to others and coming to understand them. The siren song can contain wisdom.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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The siren and her song can express for love for a man, even a desire to save him. Wisdom consists of listening to others and coming to understand them. The siren song can contain wisdom.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Mark :)
gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm guessing this Siren is a good Siren and saved this person, or this person just enjoyed the lust of a good Siren. One just never knows. LOL Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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I'm guessing this Siren is a good Siren and saved this person, or this person just enjoyed the lust of a good Siren. One just never knows. LOL Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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In Greek mythology, sirens allure sailersto their deaths but this particular siren went rogue lol
Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Love,
Marival
Comment from shelley kaye
cool gogyohka suite contrasting the siren with love
descriptions worked well with nice imagery and a smooth flow of words
cool pics, too!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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cool gogyohka suite contrasting the siren with love
descriptions worked well with nice imagery and a smooth flow of words
cool pics, too!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 28-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi MariVal,
what a beautifully visual composition.
I love the thought that we are lead to the helping-hand of fate when we are at our lowest.
I'm all-in on the deep-dive as your metaphoric prowess leaves a lasting imprint.
Truly beautifully presented and constructed dear wordsmith!
With our thoughts we create...
the need to be saved.
Warmest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Hi MariVal,
what a beautifully visual composition.
I love the thought that we are lead to the helping-hand of fate when we are at our lowest.
I'm all-in on the deep-dive as your metaphoric prowess leaves a lasting imprint.
Truly beautifully presented and constructed dear wordsmith!
With our thoughts we create...
the need to be saved.
Warmest regards,
James.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2024
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Have I told you how much I like your quotes? They are always relevant and insightful.
Thank you very much, James, not only for this review but all the reviews yesterday and today.
I created a book for my favorite poems. When I have time I will go through my other books and choose the best ones.
It's true, we all need to be saved at some point.
Gracias, cariņo,
Tu amiga, marival
"Next to creating a life, the finest thing a man or a woman can do is save one." 'Abraham Lincoln
Comment from RJ Heritage
This is intriguing, the imagery, the words and the palette work very well together.
I grew up reading Greek mythology and loved it all. I like the double picture, it is seldom seen. Well done.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This is intriguing, the imagery, the words and the palette work very well together.
I grew up reading Greek mythology and loved it all. I like the double picture, it is seldom seen. Well done.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I like Greek mythology too (*=*)
Thank you very much, RJ. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Lovely just lovely. You are such a romantic. I used to be. I miss being that way. Goos writing, Good pictures. Have a very good carefree week. Karen :-)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Lovely just lovely. You are such a romantic. I used to be. I miss being that way. Goos writing, Good pictures. Have a very good carefree week. Karen :-)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much, Karen. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Dr. Nad
I think at some point in time in our life we all need rescuing. Thank you for this poem that speaks of your rescuer. Some find peace and contentment through hard work and some find their way through by other means. The important thing for us to do is find our way. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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I think at some point in time in our life we all need rescuing. Thank you for this poem that speaks of your rescuer. Some find peace and contentment through hard work and some find their way through by other means. The important thing for us to do is find our way. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome!
Comment from jessizero
This was a lovely poem likening someone being "saved" like a siren saving someone at sea. Usually they lead men to their deaths, so this is unusual but beautiful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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This was a lovely poem likening someone being "saved" like a siren saving someone at sea. Usually they lead men to their deaths, so this is unusual but beautiful. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
Gypsy hugs