Free your mind
Naani poem5 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This is a good reminder that we should show love everywhere we go. Only with sharing do we open ourselves and others to grow in faith.
Have a great day.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Hi
This is a good reminder that we should show love everywhere we go. Only with sharing do we open ourselves and others to grow in faith.
Have a great day.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2024
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a very meditative and soothing post, written fluently with a lovely message of allowing love to fill the void of the mind. Beautifully illustrated too. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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This is a very meditative and soothing post, written fluently with a lovely message of allowing love to fill the void of the mind. Beautifully illustrated too. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from Val Crisson
There is no rhythming in naani. I don't like giving fours, but there so many in this contest I needed to speak. I feel that the person who created this contest should have explained naani better
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There is no rhythming in naani. I don't like giving fours, but there so many in this contest I needed to speak. I feel that the person who created this contest should have explained naani better
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
Comment from jessizero
This was a great poem about love and life. I like that life without love is hollow. I didn't care for the font, but that's not a big deal. The picture you supplied added to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This was a great poem about love and life. I like that life without love is hollow. I didn't care for the font, but that's not a big deal. The picture you supplied added to the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear jessi <3
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt. I enjoyed the additional rhyme in this poe. The syllable count meets the criteria of the Naani poem. Nice artwork to add to the presentation. FYI don't forget to credit on the page where the artwork came from. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Naani Poetry writing prompt. I enjoyed the additional rhyme in this poe. The syllable count meets the criteria of the Naani poem. Nice artwork to add to the presentation. FYI don't forget to credit on the page where the artwork came from. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you dear Marilyn <3
