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a naani12 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
Rod,
Congrats on your win in the Nanni poem contest. Your short but creative poem is an exceptional example of a Nanni. The syllable count is perfect and the imagery infused in the 5 lines of the poem is brilliant. This poem however is deserving of 10 stars+
All the best,
Eugene
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Rod,
Congrats on your win in the Nanni poem contest. Your short but creative poem is an exceptional example of a Nanni. The syllable count is perfect and the imagery infused in the 5 lines of the poem is brilliant. This poem however is deserving of 10 stars+
All the best,
Eugene
Comment Written 12-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, Eugene, for your wonderful response to my Naani and all those bright stars. Rod
Comment from patricia dillon
You are a worthy winner. The metaphor is very original and striking. Congratulations on your choice of illustration. It complemented your words perfectly.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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You are a worthy winner. The metaphor is very original and striking. Congratulations on your choice of illustration. It complemented your words perfectly.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia, for all the kudos. Rod
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You're welcome
Comment from Wendy G
Beautiful, and the words match the stunning photo very well. I like the image of the warm butter melting! Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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Beautiful, and the words match the stunning photo very well. I like the image of the warm butter melting! Sending best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2024
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I am so pleased you like the imagery in my Naani, Wendy. Many thanks for sharing. Rod
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
I love that description of warm butter melting, inspired, evoking a pleasurable, warm and comforting sensation of peace. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I love that description of warm butter melting, inspired, evoking a pleasurable, warm and comforting sensation of peace. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I am so pleased you like my simile, Debbie. Thank you for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Val Crisson
FYI, naani as most often about human relationships. Sorry, I don't like giving fours, but there are so many flawed naani I felt the need. Fortunately, yours doesn't rhyme as so many in this contest do.
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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FYI, naani as most often about human relationships. Sorry, I don't like giving fours, but there are so many flawed naani I felt the need. Fortunately, yours doesn't rhyme as so many in this contest do.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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There is nothing that I have read that says a Naani is "most often" about human relationships. The prompt said it could be about anything and so did most poetry sites on Google.
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Obviously, you don't write naani often. The prompt was pathetic. Nonetheless, good luck.
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Well, this site as to look into what short form rules are allowed. The second place winner in this contest was a naani.
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed reading your beautiful Naani poem.
The imagery is wonderful. I loved the sun spreading like melted butter.
it gives the reader a peaceful feeling.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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I enjoyed reading your beautiful Naani poem.
The imagery is wonderful. I loved the sun spreading like melted butter.
it gives the reader a peaceful feeling.
Good luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Nancy. I am delighted you loved my simile.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. Such a beautiful overall presentation. Breathtaking photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This is a beautifully written poem. Such a beautiful overall presentation. Breathtaking photo to compliment your words as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much, Joanne, for your marvelous response to my poem and photo.
Comment from GoWiSt
Good use of simile for the sun and butter.
Indeed, the scenery of dusk is a beautiful, captivating setting.
Successfully met the line and syllable count requirements of the poem type and contest.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Good use of simile for the sun and butter.
Indeed, the scenery of dusk is a beautiful, captivating setting.
Successfully met the line and syllable count requirements of the poem type and contest.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much, GoWiSt, for sharing and praising my Naani.
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful poem. I like the "warm butter melting" line. Looking until day departed was a lovely way to spend time. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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This was a beautiful poem. I like the "warm butter melting" line. Looking until day departed was a lovely way to spend time. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I love sunsets and I?m so pleased you like my Naani, jessizero. Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Julie Helms
A very original metaphor--the sun melting over the water. It's vivid and really engages the senses ...the warmth, the color, all really effective in setting your scene!
Julie
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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A very original metaphor--the sun melting over the water. It's vivid and really engages the senses ...the warmth, the color, all really effective in setting your scene!
Julie
Comment Written 07-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2024
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I am so pleased you like my simile, Julie. Many thanks for sharing and praising my Naani.
