Listening To The Nature of God
Just listening to the nature of God3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I think I'm slightly confused. I thought a loop poem had four lines per stanza and a rhyming scheme of ABCB. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I think I'm slightly confused. I thought a loop poem had four lines per stanza and a rhyming scheme of ABCB. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Hey there Barbara,
Thanks for the advice! I edited it and even added another verse. Have a good day and God bless!
Comment from Nicki.B
I think this is a very sweet and uncomplicated poem that I believe kids will enjoy because, it's worded simply with terms like soft & fluffy, and drip drop has little peoples appeal. Well done I enjoyed it
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
I think this is a very sweet and uncomplicated poem that I believe kids will enjoy because, it's worded simply with terms like soft & fluffy, and drip drop has little peoples appeal. Well done I enjoyed it
Comment Written 14-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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Dear Nicola,
I?m glad you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for your rating and review! God bless you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I loved the imagery in your poem. It was so beautifu. It captures the soothing rhythm of raindrops falling. You set the mood so well. The the phrase "Drip drop" creates a gentle sound. I could hear the raindrops tapping against the surface. I love that you share the beauty of nature's wonders. I could feel God's blessings in your poem.
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
I loved the imagery in your poem. It was so beautifu. It captures the soothing rhythm of raindrops falling. You set the mood so well. The the phrase "Drip drop" creates a gentle sound. I could hear the raindrops tapping against the surface. I love that you share the beauty of nature's wonders. I could feel God's blessings in your poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2024
reply by the author on 18-May-2024
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I?m glad you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for the rating and review! God bless you!