Willing Hearts
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34 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I am amazed that you keep your story so vibrant. I can follow your story easily no matter how long it has been since I read the last one. You do this the best of anyone. Your character listings, your concise chapter rehash, all make your stories super readable. Thanks for the good stories. Karen
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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I am amazed that you keep your story so vibrant. I can follow your story easily no matter how long it has been since I read the last one. You do this the best of anyone. Your character listings, your concise chapter rehash, all make your stories super readable. Thanks for the good stories. Karen
Comment Written 04-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2024
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I appreciate you. Thank you. Sorry you had to read these when no money was attached.
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Wow, that was intense. It brought things into perspective, Noah has a hard job to do and it comes first.i was hoping they could hug but now I'm not sure.
Good job, your story is engaging and exciting.
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Wow, that was intense. It brought things into perspective, Noah has a hard job to do and it comes first.i was hoping they could hug but now I'm not sure.
Good job, your story is engaging and exciting.
Comment Written 23-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Daylily
Hope you have a wonderful time with your family. That is more important than following a posting schedule. Your chapters will be enjoyed no matter when they get released. This is another excellent one! Smiles, Lily
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Hope you have a wonderful time with your family. That is more important than following a posting schedule. Your chapters will be enjoyed no matter when they get released. This is another excellent one! Smiles, Lily
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 23-May-2024
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Thank you for understanding and the kind review.
Comment from Sanku
i felt very sad that Sami could not show spontaneous happiness at Noah's return. Anyway there was action as well as emotion in this chapter .Things are hotting up, I think...
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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i felt very sad that Sami could not show spontaneous happiness at Noah's return. Anyway there was action as well as emotion in this chapter .Things are hotting up, I think...
Comment Written 22-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lancellot
A very solid chapter. Things seems to be progressing nicely. Only a couple of suggestions. Nothing your editor won't review for you. Good work
notes/suggestions only:
Five men had been playing cards and two watching.
-Five men had been playing cards and two were watching.
Five of the seven died from {gun shots}.
- Five of the seven died from gunshots.
Bob's computer notified him of information.
-Bob's computer notified him of the information.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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A very solid chapter. Things seems to be progressing nicely. Only a couple of suggestions. Nothing your editor won't review for you. Good work
notes/suggestions only:
Five men had been playing cards and two watching.
-Five men had been playing cards and two were watching.
Five of the seven died from {gun shots}.
- Five of the seven died from gunshots.
Bob's computer notified him of information.
-Bob's computer notified him of the information.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I appreciate the catches. I have made the correction.
Comment from GoWiSt
"A hit was made against part of Noah's team." Oh, I'm sure that must have pissed Noah off. Bet Ryan is somehow involved.
Yes, despite his precautionary measures, I think it was dangerous for Noah to have visited Sean in the hospital so soon after the attack. 'They' could have been waiting for him.
Another interesting chapter--well narrated.
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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"A hit was made against part of Noah's team." Oh, I'm sure that must have pissed Noah off. Bet Ryan is somehow involved.
Yes, despite his precautionary measures, I think it was dangerous for Noah to have visited Sean in the hospital so soon after the attack. 'They' could have been waiting for him.
Another interesting chapter--well narrated.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 22-May-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Noah tends to take risks.
Comment from Paul McFarland
It looks like we are about to straighten out Noah's and Sami's relationship. I wouldn't be surprised if you threw another curve ball at us before you wind things up.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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It looks like we are about to straighten out Noah's and Sami's relationship. I wouldn't be surprised if you threw another curve ball at us before you wind things up.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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There are a few curve balls to be mixed in this mess. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Time with family is definitely more important than posting. We will survive, we might grumble but we will survive. I like how you knocked their usual routine on its meister with the hit. I wasn't expecting it. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Time with family is definitely more important than posting. We will survive, we might grumble but we will survive. I like how you knocked their usual routine on its meister with the hit. I wasn't expecting it. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you for the sharing this kind review with me.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Your story has covered a lot of ground in 16-days worth of action, but I'm guessing, you're about to turn up the volume really soon in the near future. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Your story has covered a lot of ground in 16-days worth of action, but I'm guessing, you're about to turn up the volume really soon in the near future. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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The volume will be turned up shortly. LOL That's what I hate about only posting once a week. It takes a while to get where I'm going. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
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Yes, it's hard to get all the back story and set the stage. But you've done a fantastic job of letting us readers know the tension is building in the background. LOL. Have a wonderful vacation!
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Thank you.
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You're welcome!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I didn't realise I hadn't read the previous chapter, I just thought I had. Now I'm late reading this one, too. I hope you are having a nice break, (even though you are still posting and reviewing!!
That was terrible about the shooting, but I'm so pleased that Sean is alright now. Obviously, whoever did it, followed at a distance. And that rule that Noah and Sami can't cuddle, that is going to drive them nuts! Well done, Babara. :)) Sandra xx
Enjoy the rest of your holiday. I'm here this coming Sunday, but then I'm away for three weeks, and I'm not takine my laptop or Ipad. I'm just going to chill out and enjoy it.
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I didn't realise I hadn't read the previous chapter, I just thought I had. Now I'm late reading this one, too. I hope you are having a nice break, (even though you are still posting and reviewing!!
That was terrible about the shooting, but I'm so pleased that Sean is alright now. Obviously, whoever did it, followed at a distance. And that rule that Noah and Sami can't cuddle, that is going to drive them nuts! Well done, Babara. :)) Sandra xx
Enjoy the rest of your holiday. I'm here this coming Sunday, but then I'm away for three weeks, and I'm not takine my laptop or Ipad. I'm just going to chill out and enjoy it.
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I'm passing all reviews except my favorite author's. I'm reviewing while my mom naps. LOL Thank you for the kind reveiw.