Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This is a funny story. I am glad the angst was removed by a thoughtful sister who is also forgetful. She should have told the speaker that she was cleaning it and maybe he could have reminder her before this day to pick it up.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Have a great day.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024

I appreciate you stopping over.

It did received one vote from some kind member .

It was a last minute entry ..

reading the other awesome poems I kinda knew the result would have sucked.

I still enjoyed writing it and practise makes perfect , right?

Another reviewer yesterday wrote ( besides the flow is broken) that she noted some mistakes but didn?t tell me which.

So I?m not any the wiser.

Take care and I hope you have a great weekend!

reply by dragonpoet on 06-Jun-2024

Don't mention it, Tempeste.
Joan

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Good

This poem was good, and it told a story. However, I did notice a couple of errors, and the flow was broken in a couple of spots.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024

I just woke up and read your comment.

I appreciate helpful feedback , I?m here to learn.

Apart the broken flow you say quote:

I noticed a couple of errors .

the fact you don?t point them out , just left me upset.

I?m always appreciative if a member shows me where I have made errors so I can correct them and better my work.

I also always acknowledge my thanks gifting a nomination for the kind help.

Obviously the errors will remain unless someone points them out to me .

so how do you think I must feel reading your review ?

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi. I'm really enjoying this contest. There have been a lot of really neat entries.

Your last sock was not lost at all was it? Sisters!!

Rhyming scheme. Humorous presentation.

I enjoyed reading your poem

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024

Thanks for the kind review, it was a last minute entry , I didn?t actually know where I was going to end up when I started.

I thought it was an interesting contest topic.

Comment from Nicole Schmidt

Excellent

A fake evergreen that stands tall
I decorated it with bright lights and red balls.


Strong wording overall. I wish you all the best moving forward!!

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2024

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2024

Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

It was a last minute entry , I thought the topic of the contest was a great idea.