Relief
Ahhhh! Bubble Therapy6 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Sounds pretty good to me! The presentation is excellent, complementing your very inviting suggestion of a bubble bath. I enjoyed the rhyme anyway (even if I don't get the bath), a nice addition to your 25 syllable verse. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Sounds pretty good to me! The presentation is excellent, complementing your very inviting suggestion of a bubble bath. I enjoyed the rhyme anyway (even if I don't get the bath), a nice addition to your 25 syllable verse. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!
Comment from jessizero
I think this is a great 25 syllable poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and I'm sure many people can relate to this. Hot baths are one of my favorite ways to cope with stress. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I think this is a great 25 syllable poem for the contest. You got the syllable count right, and I'm sure many people can relate to this. Hot baths are one of my favorite ways to cope with stress. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from royowen
Sometimes the rain we receive is so refreshing after a long period dry, hot weather I'm so glad we have those precious showers, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Sometimes the rain we receive is so refreshing after a long period dry, hot weather I'm so glad we have those precious showers, beautifully written good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
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Most welcome
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Where is the grief coming from? It could be anything large or small, I suppose
I agree little warm bath is very soothing and could probably cure a lot of pain cures them physically especially with waterjets like a jacuzzi.
But it also works on the nervous system to calm the soul
You conveyed all of this in your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Where is the grief coming from? It could be anything large or small, I suppose
I agree little warm bath is very soothing and could probably cure a lot of pain cures them physically especially with waterjets like a jacuzzi.
But it also works on the nervous system to calm the soul
You conveyed all of this in your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much! My grief lately is dead car, dead dryer, dead microwave & trying to keep up with all the daily issues without draining the bank accounts--LOL!
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
There is nothing quite like a hot bath to wash away stress. It's great overall and the imagery is very strong. Great job. I wish you all the best overall.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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There is nothing quite like a hot bath to wash away stress. It's great overall and the imagery is very strong. Great job. I wish you all the best overall.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thanks so much!
Comment from zaraduck6
What a neat little poem! I love the wording--you're right--bubble baths are the perfect way to decompress. The ABCDB rhyme scheme is fabulous, as is the artwork. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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What a neat little poem! I love the wording--you're right--bubble baths are the perfect way to decompress. The ABCDB rhyme scheme is fabulous, as is the artwork. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much!