Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Emotional Hurricane "Book Four Wolf Bend Series
5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
What a build-up here! Such back-up activity, all conveyed so vividly here. The absolute horror of finding Kenneth Lee and the realisation that Katie is the culprit drive the pace on with momentum. Now Jesse is off to get his boy back. Wow, Doug, this seems to be heading for a grand finale. Once again, you prove your great talent when it comes to drama and keeping your reader on the edge of their seat! Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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What a build-up here! Such back-up activity, all conveyed so vividly here. The absolute horror of finding Kenneth Lee and the realisation that Katie is the culprit drive the pace on with momentum. Now Jesse is off to get his boy back. Wow, Doug, this seems to be heading for a grand finale. Once again, you prove your great talent when it comes to drama and keeping your reader on the edge of their seat! Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you. Just four chapters left!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
They just have to get there in time. I am actually on the edge of my seat. I need answers. GRRR. Thank you for sharing this post with us. Greg has to fight her off. I enjoy reading this story. This is an excellent right.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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They just have to get there in time. I am actually on the edge of my seat. I need answers. GRRR. Thank you for sharing this post with us. Greg has to fight her off. I enjoy reading this story. This is an excellent right.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thank you! Only four chapters left!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Seems to me the magnetic force of the earth might have most of my pals on FS lulled to sleep. I mean I had not written a thing for a week and its been ten days for you. Vacations? Illness? That's ok. Even the great authors took time away.
This chapter sends a thought that things are about to culminate.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Seems to me the magnetic force of the earth might have most of my pals on FS lulled to sleep. I mean I had not written a thing for a week and its been ten days for you. Vacations? Illness? That's ok. Even the great authors took time away.
This chapter sends a thought that things are about to culminate.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I?ve been earning big $$$ elsewhere for my writing efforts. It has gone way better than I ever expected. Still LOVE the boutique style of FS. It is my first home.
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Congrats
May all the stars continue to align and perhaps the day will come when you ?ll be on a late night shiw
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written.
His chest was torn wide open and he could write 'Katie'? Good on him.
Things are coming to a head. But how do they manage to kill Lillith?
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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Nicely written.
His chest was torn wide open and he could write 'Katie'? Good on him.
Things are coming to a head. But how do they manage to kill Lillith?
Best wishes.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2024
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I?m hoping that means that you are staying tuned for the last few chapters to find out!
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smiley face here
Comment from royowen
So Kenneth Lee has been found murdered by Lilith, and they have lost another friend to the murderous but tempting wiles of Lilith, you're an amazing writer Douglas, you're dong so well my friend, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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So Kenneth Lee has been found murdered by Lilith, and they have lost another friend to the murderous but tempting wiles of Lilith, you're an amazing writer Douglas, you're dong so well my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thanks Roy! Almost finished with this one.
