A Treasured Space
Messy rooms have a purpose22 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh, my goodness. I am not at all sure messy rooms have a purpose and if there's bugs, I'm gone. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Oh, my goodness. I am not at all sure messy rooms have a purpose and if there's bugs, I'm gone. LOL Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate you!
Comment from F. William Lester
So true. The pleasure of our kids is often so short lived. Ours have stayed relatively close (our son is in the Army and stationed in Wisconsin, but our daughter is only thirty minutes away). Enjoy them while you can because they will be gone before you know it. Thank you for sharing these thoughts. Have a wonderful day and stay well.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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So true. The pleasure of our kids is often so short lived. Ours have stayed relatively close (our son is in the Army and stationed in Wisconsin, but our daughter is only thirty minutes away). Enjoy them while you can because they will be gone before you know it. Thank you for sharing these thoughts. Have a wonderful day and stay well.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. It's a great blessing to have children living close. Mine are scattered, but I'm planning a reunion soon.
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You're most welcome. Best wishes for your reunion. Have a wonderful day.
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Thank you very much. It's a great blessing to have children living close. Mine are scattered, but I'm planning a reunion soon.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You did a good job with the form.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of internal rhyme in line one,
and a good beginning for your poem.
-I like how you address your daughter in line three.
-The last three lines show how much
you love your daughter, and give her
her own space to enjoy the things she likes.
-A very good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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-Nice image and presentation.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You did a good job with the form.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good use of internal rhyme in line one,
and a good beginning for your poem.
-I like how you address your daughter in line three.
-The last three lines show how much
you love your daughter, and give her
her own space to enjoy the things she likes.
-A very good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reviewing this, Pam. I appreciate your comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, I've written stuff about the past, some things are a comfort, but the mistakes we've made are just blots on the mind, good teaches, but you've written a very good entry in this contes, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Heh heh, I've written stuff about the past, some things are a comfort, but the mistakes we've made are just blots on the mind, good teaches, but you've written a very good entry in this contes, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Blessings to you, Roy! Thank you for reviewing this.
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Most welcome
Comment from Laurie Holding
I loved this one! The art is a perfect mate for your ABC poem. Nice work. I don't get the last line being able to start with an I, though. Is it four lines that have to be chronologically alphabetical, then live it up for line five? Good luck in the contest, and if I'm in town for the voting, I'll remember this one!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I loved this one! The art is a perfect mate for your ABC poem. Nice work. I don't get the last line being able to start with an I, though. Is it four lines that have to be chronologically alphabetical, then live it up for line five? Good luck in the contest, and if I'm in town for the voting, I'll remember this one!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for reviewing this, Laurie. This is the first ABC poem that I've written, and it surprised me that only the first 4 lines must have letters that are in alphabetical order. Maybe they could call it an "ABCD" poem ?!
Comment from elainec4
I enjoyed reading your post for several reasons. It was easy to read and understand, and it flowed easily. But I loved the subject matter. It was stirring, and it provoked thought. And your chosen picture was perfect. thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed reading your post for several reasons. It was easy to read and understand, and it flowed easily. But I loved the subject matter. It was stirring, and it provoked thought. And your chosen picture was perfect. thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reviewing this and for your kind comments, Elaine.
Comment from Aussie
Exactly, we are only children once and the world is our oyster. I liked your poem. Kids get too much useless homework and miss out on human interaction. Who knows, she may become a botanist? K xx
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Exactly, we are only children once and the world is our oyster. I liked your poem. Kids get too much useless homework and miss out on human interaction. Who knows, she may become a botanist? K xx
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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You're so right - we never know the path that they'll choose! My mother used to let be bring home every bug and critter I found.
Even an injured baby bat that we nursed back to health. I brought it to show-and-tell in 2nd grade and was sent home immediatley!
Thank you, Aussie.
Thank you for reviewing this.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the ABC Poetry Contest. I love the message in this poem. It took me too many years to figure it out myself and I wish I could go back and think differently about things. Life and especially your children's childhood, goes too quickly to be worries about unimportant things. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the ABC Poetry Contest. I love the message in this poem. It took me too many years to figure it out myself and I wish I could go back and think differently about things. Life and especially your children's childhood, goes too quickly to be worries about unimportant things. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for reviewing this, Marilyn. I had three children, then had a gap of 12 years before my last child was born. My priorities were then completely different. I knew what was unimportant, and how fast time would fly by!
Comment from jessizero
This was a great ABC poem for the contest. I thought your message was fun and sweet, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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This was a great ABC poem for the contest. I thought your message was fun and sweet, and I liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Colorado Owl, this poem and your comment lets me know what a fantastic and fun mother you must be! A very creative, loving way of looking at a messy room, lol! Maddy
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Colorado Owl, this poem and your comment lets me know what a fantastic and fun mother you must be! A very creative, loving way of looking at a messy room, lol! Maddy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Maddy. I had three children,then had a gap of 12 years before my last child was born. My priorities were then completely different. I knew what was unimportant, and how fast time would fly by!
