Exchanges
Heart to heart.3 total reviews
Comment from EeanBlack
I love this Shirley. I just recently had a heart attack. Stop eating rich foods my ass. I will though, because I really feel like I have a lot to learn in this world. You know, like how to prepare healthy foods. Lol.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I love this Shirley. I just recently had a heart attack. Stop eating rich foods my ass. I will though, because I really feel like I have a lot to learn in this world. You know, like how to prepare healthy foods. Lol.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hi Eean. Sorry for delay, I've been away.
Thank you for the great review and take good care of yourself.
Comment from jessizero
This was a great poem, and that last line was a wonderful way to sum it up. It looks like you got the syllable count right, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This was a great poem, and that last line was a wonderful way to sum it up. It looks like you got the syllable count right, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Jessi.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem uses the metaphor of a heart transplant to symbolize a deep and mutual exchange of love. The concept is creative and conveys the idea of a meaningful connection. Overall, it's a succinct and inventive way to express a loving relationship.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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This poem uses the metaphor of a heart transplant to symbolize a deep and mutual exchange of love. The concept is creative and conveys the idea of a meaningful connection. Overall, it's a succinct and inventive way to express a loving relationship.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Patty.
