One Man's Loss...
another's gain3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
I am wondering if the the writer was just tired of writing about death and wanted someone else to take his depressing job. I don't know how the speaker thinks writing obituaries is a joyful job unless the newly dead writer is her cheating boyfriend.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
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Hi
I am wondering if the the writer was just tired of writing about death and wanted someone else to take his depressing job. I don't know how the speaker thinks writing obituaries is a joyful job unless the newly dead writer is her cheating boyfriend.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great rest of the week.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, One Man's Loss, presented with an AABBCCDD-octave and using the required words, shows a girl on the move and seeing the kernel of corn in any pile of dung.
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This poem, One Man's Loss, presented with an AABBCCDD-octave and using the required words, shows a girl on the move and seeing the kernel of corn in any pile of dung.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem delivers a darkly humorous and poignant take on the life of an obituary writer. It skillfully blends grim reality with a sense of irony and personal satisfaction.
1. Dark Humor: The poem's use of dark humor is effective in portraying the protagonist's unique perspective on death. The contrast between the somber nature of obituaries and the office girl's delight adds a sharp, satirical edge.
2. Irony and Contrast: The juxtaposition of the assistant's joy with others' grief creates a striking contrast. This irony adds depth to the poem, highlighting how different individuals cope with and find meaning in their experiences.
3. Clever Rhyming: The rhyme scheme is well-crafted, enhancing the poem's rhythm and flow. The use of rhyme to emphasize the assistant's transition from outsider to a content writer is both engaging and effective.
Overall, your poem provides a thought-provoking and darkly witty reflection on the nature of work and personal satisfaction, making it a great entry.
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This poem delivers a darkly humorous and poignant take on the life of an obituary writer. It skillfully blends grim reality with a sense of irony and personal satisfaction.
1. Dark Humor: The poem's use of dark humor is effective in portraying the protagonist's unique perspective on death. The contrast between the somber nature of obituaries and the office girl's delight adds a sharp, satirical edge.
2. Irony and Contrast: The juxtaposition of the assistant's joy with others' grief creates a striking contrast. This irony adds depth to the poem, highlighting how different individuals cope with and find meaning in their experiences.
3. Clever Rhyming: The rhyme scheme is well-crafted, enhancing the poem's rhythm and flow. The use of rhyme to emphasize the assistant's transition from outsider to a content writer is both engaging and effective.
Overall, your poem provides a thought-provoking and darkly witty reflection on the nature of work and personal satisfaction, making it a great entry.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024