Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi


This is a very good flowery poem. What do I mean by flowery got a lot of images that are nice during the the whole poem

I liked sparkling, diamond, dust, and a few other metaphors that you created

I believe you should've entered this in the free verse, but your contest. But this is one of the strongest entries in this contest that I've seen so far.

Beautifully done wonderful imagery

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thank you for the encouraging feedback.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You brought the sparkle in the night with your descriptive words of light dancing when touched by the moon, I enjoyed your twinkling words here, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024

Thanks for your sparkling review. Appreciated.