Virtuous Love
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Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is excellent. The Picture is perfect. Your story is gorgeous, earthy and very loving. I wouldn't change a thing. Back to unpacking for me. I still swear the boxes breed when I am sleep. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This is excellent. The Picture is perfect. Your story is gorgeous, earthy and very loving. I wouldn't change a thing. Back to unpacking for me. I still swear the boxes breed when I am sleep. Karen
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Unpacking from to where?
Thanks for the compliment.
Be well. Goodnight
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I empties my bstorage units in Houston, and brought stuff up here. I am unpacking and donating lots of things. Karen
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Tom,
well, this is a little bit flowery for me, but obviously it appeals to some readers. It's not that I'm not a romantic, it's just that I'm wearing my flannel shirt and jeans while I'm reading this and I can't quite relate. Good luck in the contest buddy.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Hello Tom,
well, this is a little bit flowery for me, but obviously it appeals to some readers. It's not that I'm not a romantic, it's just that I'm wearing my flannel shirt and jeans while I'm reading this and I can't quite relate. Good luck in the contest buddy.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I understand, but you need to know this is a fantasy.
Comment from jessizero
This was a beautiful piece of flash fiction. It was sensual without being graphic or vulgar. It was moving, to say the least. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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This was a beautiful piece of flash fiction. It was sensual without being graphic or vulgar. It was moving, to say the least. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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If the missus thinks anythinig of my writing it is the romantic overtones in most all that is written. In fact, after this piece she noted... you ought to write a romance novel.
Comment from Jim Wile
This was really good, Tom. You painted a terrific picture of a virtuous love in white. Loved the imagery and the picture you chose. I'm just wondering what you had in mind with "my cold vermilions." Is there a particular meaning to this phrase that I'm not aware of?
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This was really good, Tom. You painted a terrific picture of a virtuous love in white. Loved the imagery and the picture you chose. I'm just wondering what you had in mind with "my cold vermilions." Is there a particular meaning to this phrase that I'm not aware of?
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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FS programming has run afoul
I have been replying and saving my comments But they must go to a nearby teach can
Vermillion = rad
Vermilion = lips
Per Roget
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Try restarting your computer. That sometimes solves all such problems.
A little bit of a stretch on the vermilions, but I guess you have poetic license to do that.
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I swear I found vermilion to be lips in the thesaurus or dictionary, but now cannot, thus poetic license it must be.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is romantic and sentimental Tom and I enjoyed your warm embracing words here as you tell a tale of lasting and enduring love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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This is romantic and sentimental Tom and I enjoyed your warm embracing words here as you tell a tale of lasting and enduring love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Merci Beaucoup.
Gracias
Comment from GWHARGIS
Your flash fiction was indeed romantic. It was the stuff fantasies are made of. From the sateen sheets to the gentle kisses, then carrying your lover to the bed. It covered all of the bases for romance. Wonderful entry for the contest. Gretchen
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Your flash fiction was indeed romantic. It was the stuff fantasies are made of. From the sateen sheets to the gentle kisses, then carrying your lover to the bed. It covered all of the bases for romance. Wonderful entry for the contest. Gretchen
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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and to think I did it in seventy-five words which is on par with and when I did it in life. :-O
No wonder I am celibate today.
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and to think I did it in seventy-five words which is on par with and when I did it in life. :-O
No wonder I am celibate today.
Comment from Wendy G
That could well be in a love sory contest. The image is beautiful, speaking of sweet and innocent love. Your romantic words convey much, and leave the rest to one's imagination. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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That could well be in a love sory contest. The image is beautiful, speaking of sweet and innocent love. Your romantic words convey much, and leave the rest to one's imagination. Well done. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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See
It remains
Comment from karenina
Speaking as a woman (duh, how else would I speak?)-- This is gently sexual, sweetly seductive and chock full of about every wonderful romantic thing I'd want in MY dreams (and to come true!)
What a great entry! You just might have a winner here! (It is in my book)
So--I have to ask...WHICH play did WILL S. write in 1597 that you are referencing?
(I tried to research but alas, there were several!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Speaking as a woman (duh, how else would I speak?)-- This is gently sexual, sweetly seductive and chock full of about every wonderful romantic thing I'd want in MY dreams (and to come true!)
What a great entry! You just might have a winner here! (It is in my book)
So--I have to ask...WHICH play did WILL S. write in 1597 that you are referencing?
(I tried to research but alas, there were several!)
Karenina
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Romeo and Juliet came to life on stage
It was written 4 to 6 years earlier. Always yours.
😎
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Ahhhhh. Thanks!
Comment from BethShelby
I would say this sounds very romantic. Are you dreaming agian? I know you aren't all that innocent that you need rose petals on satin sheets. Besides you say it arrived while you spept. Maybe it will win the flash. Romance is in high demand.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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I would say this sounds very romantic. Are you dreaming agian? I know you aren't all that innocent that you need rose petals on satin sheets. Besides you say it arrived while you spept. Maybe it will win the flash. Romance is in high demand.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Just the first words came to me, and then I tossed until first light when I got a blank and began to type. Ten minutes later I searched for the picture.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow! And what a romantic scene you've created. Tom terrific. Shakespeare would be proud. Now, you must hide the poison, and watch our for the dagger hidden beneath the sheets. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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Wow! And what a romantic scene you've created. Tom terrific. Shakespeare would be proud. Now, you must hide the poison, and watch our for the dagger hidden beneath the sheets. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024
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What? Who would be the whirling dervish that would plant such things on a love so true?
Always with care, yours.