One moment at a time
A rhyming poem42 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Concise and to the point. I believe that on here especially, we send out best wishes, blessings, and love in many forms. I believe they add up, as everything is energy. Enough energy is sent your way to turn the tide. When you went in for surgery I added an ask for prayers on everything I wrote, others did as well. We help as we can. :-) Karen
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Concise and to the point. I believe that on here especially, we send out best wishes, blessings, and love in many forms. I believe they add up, as everything is energy. Enough energy is sent your way to turn the tide. When you went in for surgery I added an ask for prayers on everything I wrote, others did as well. We help as we can. :-) Karen
Comment Written 17-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2024
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Thanks, Karen, for your best wishes and prayers during and after my latest surgery. Every little bit helps. I appreciate your positive feedback.
Enjoy the weekend.
Jesse
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I hope and pray that you, your family, and your friends stay happy and healthy. Karen
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Thanks, Karen. I appreciate it.
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You are welcome. Karen
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
You really gave this agonizing time, when there's nothing you can do, but wait, dimension. In so few words, which made it stark and powerful! My big brother went through this last year. Glad we still have our older brothers! A great post! Maddy
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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You really gave this agonizing time, when there's nothing you can do, but wait, dimension. In so few words, which made it stark and powerful! My big brother went through this last year. Glad we still have our older brothers! A great post! Maddy
Comment Written 04-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Hello Maddy.
Your thoughtful review shows you are getting better at reviewing.
You've come a long way since I first met you.
Thanks for the powerful review. Your descriptions of how it worked gave me time to think about how I came to write this poem.
Anxiously waiting for the outcome of my brother's surgery.
Yes, I am happy we still have our older brothers!
Thank you for the sixer! It means the world to me!
Have a lovely Sunday!
Jesse
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Your words touched
my heart and soul!
Thanks so much!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Jesse. I am glad your brother's surgery went well. I like the rhyming scheme. I hope your brother continues to heal. Well written. Brenda.
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Hi Jesse. I am glad your brother's surgery went well. I like the rhyming scheme. I hope your brother continues to heal. Well written. Brenda.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from tfawcus
First of all, let me say how glad I am to hear that your brother's surgery had a successful outcome. The sparse nature of your poem, the short lines used, and the way you have spaced it, all contribute to the sense of anxiety felt when a member of one's family goes into hospital for a serious operation. An exceptionally fine poem, Jesse.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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First of all, let me say how glad I am to hear that your brother's surgery had a successful outcome. The sparse nature of your poem, the short lines used, and the way you have spaced it, all contribute to the sense of anxiety felt when a member of one's family goes into hospital for a serious operation. An exceptionally fine poem, Jesse.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much, Tony, for this apt description of the anxiety I felt when my brother was in surgery. You got the gist of this and I appreciate it so much.
Thanks for seeing what others missed.
I appreciate your heartfelt congratulations on my brother's successful outcome.
Last but not least, thank you for the exceptional rating and review.
You are a good friend,
Jesse
Comment from Heather Knight
Hello,
I hope your brother is recovering nicely as I see you wrote this two days ago.
Lovely rhyme and obviously heartfelt.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
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Hello,
I hope your brother is recovering nicely as I see you wrote this two days ago.
Lovely rhyme and obviously heartfelt.
Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from jim vecchio
I have been praying for you and now will also do so for your brother. He is fortunate to have this poem to memorialize your strong feelings for him. May God bless both of you richly.
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I have been praying for you and now will also do so for your brother. He is fortunate to have this poem to memorialize your strong feelings for him. May God bless both of you richly.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Jesse!
What I so appreciate about your poetic offering is how it evolved: during the time you were waiting for your brother to come out of surgery. How often writers find themselves in similar situations, and with their gifts of words and their abilities to encapsulate such moments, are able to share with readers said hopes and fears.
Well done!
Thank you for sharing!
And sending healing thoughts and positivity to you and your brother!
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hello, Jesse!
What I so appreciate about your poetic offering is how it evolved: during the time you were waiting for your brother to come out of surgery. How often writers find themselves in similar situations, and with their gifts of words and their abilities to encapsulate such moments, are able to share with readers said hopes and fears.
Well done!
Thank you for sharing!
And sending healing thoughts and positivity to you and your brother!
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Good morning, Diane!
Thank you so much for this exceptional rating and review!
You caught the gist of the feeling it takes to write while waiting for a loved one to come out of surgery.
Your sixer means the world to me.
Thanks for your healing thoughts and positivity for me and my brother.
Take care, my friend!
Jesse
Comment from Janet Foor
So happy the surgery was successful Jesse and happy you could be there for him.
It is one moment at a time while we are waiting for someone we love to come out of an operation.
Well done and great news.
Blessings to you and your brother.
Janet
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So happy the surgery was successful Jesse and happy you could be there for him.
It is one moment at a time while we are waiting for someone we love to come out of an operation.
Well done and great news.
Blessings to you and your brother.
Janet
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Jesse, waiting the outcome of a loved one's surgery can play havoc on a person's nerves. The minutes seems like hours. Your poem is filled with high sensory appeal, and it is a poem that many can/will relate to. My best wishes for your brother's continued recovery. Sincerely, Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Hi Jesse, waiting the outcome of a loved one's surgery can play havoc on a person's nerves. The minutes seems like hours. Your poem is filled with high sensory appeal, and it is a poem that many can/will relate to. My best wishes for your brother's continued recovery. Sincerely, Margaret
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I like that phrase, High sensory appeal. It describes it well. Thank you for getting the gist of the poem.
And thanks for the good wishes.
You are a good friend, Margaret and I look forward to your review.
Take care, my friend.
Jesse
Comment from royowen
Fortunately for us, most of the surgery performed is usually successful, at least statistically, but we do hear stories where it goes awry, but it doesn't stop us worrying, so I'm glad your brother was successfully operated on Jesse,beautifully written my friend, great write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Fortunately for us, most of the surgery performed is usually successful, at least statistically, but we do hear stories where it goes awry, but it doesn't stop us worrying, so I'm glad your brother was successfully operated on Jesse,beautifully written my friend, great write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 31-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Roy. I appreciate your kind and thoughtful review.
Thanks for the blessings.
Jesse
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Most welcome