Comment from karenina

Excellent

Great job braiding the words perfectly to the image. "Latte Moon" is exquisite... You dipped your quill into muse magic with this one!

(And yes spice coffee is not far away!)

Karenina

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024

I really appreciate your comments Karen! Thank you so much!

reply by karenina on 28-Aug-2024

My pleasure...

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

I LOVE this, Jodi. From the pumpkin moon to the latte clouds and taking a sip out of Autumn. What a great image your words create. The photo couldn't be more perfect for it or perhaps the photo came first but even if it did I don't think I would have come up with the latte clouds. Very good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

I really appreciate your kind words. Thank you so much!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A lovely autumn haiku - complete with the kigo (autumn as the seasonal reference) and the satori ending with the personification of autumn sipping on the those pumpkin-flavored autumnal latte sensations! Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

Thank you for taking the time to review! I really appreciate your lovely comments!

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Fantastic entry for the contest! Great imagery that is perfectly captured in the artwork. Autumn is a season for the taste buds. Well presented. Good job!

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

Thank you so much for the great review!