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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. This is an interesting loop entry. The rhyming and the near rhyming are very good. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. This is an interesting loop entry. The rhyming and the near rhyming are very good. I enjoyed reading. Good luck with contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for posting your thoughts.
It was my first shot at this format.
I am look forward to doing another.
Comment from judiverse
I'd say you did a great job with the loop format. All the lines flow smoothly. Excellent rhyme, too. Your word choices are very fitting for the subject, like slice and tear. Very descriptive. The thought really comes across. It's the law of the jungle. I hate that hunters have to kill those animals and display their heads and hides. It's repulsive. They don't need to hunt. They just get a thrill out of it and like to show off their kills. I wouldn't want to see them in a home. I hope you have good luck in the contest. A powerful entry. judi
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I'd say you did a great job with the loop format. All the lines flow smoothly. Excellent rhyme, too. Your word choices are very fitting for the subject, like slice and tear. Very descriptive. The thought really comes across. It's the law of the jungle. I hate that hunters have to kill those animals and display their heads and hides. It's repulsive. They don't need to hunt. They just get a thrill out of it and like to show off their kills. I wouldn't want to see them in a home. I hope you have good luck in the contest. A powerful entry. judi
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Kaiku
Good stuff. Each transition presented a message. The flow was even tempered and the ending appropriate. The 'king' refers to the giant butterfly species? Enjoyed the journey.
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Good stuff. Each transition presented a message. The flow was even tempered and the ending appropriate. The 'king' refers to the giant butterfly species? Enjoyed the journey.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
Comment from Sugarray77
Wow, Franca! Your Loop is perfectly executed and is so vivid that it is easy to see the scenario in my mind's eye. Great descriptive phrases and theme. I wish you luck my friend!
Melissa
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Wow, Franca! Your Loop is perfectly executed and is so vivid that it is easy to see the scenario in my mind's eye. Great descriptive phrases and theme. I wish you luck my friend!
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thanks Sugarray for the enthusiastic review , glad you enjoyed the read!
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a great job with the loop format. I enjoyed your poem and its sentiments. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I think you did a great job with the loop format. I enjoyed your poem and its sentiments. Thank you so much for sharing this poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reading my loop!
Our barn swallows have left for South Africa , they inspired me.
I appreciate the positive feedback.
Keep safe !
Comment from Karen Dougherty Estep
The format looks right, and you have done a wonderful job with this loop poem! I enjoyed your graphic and felt that your poem flowed well from one stanza to another.
Keep writing I ng@
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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The format looks right, and you have done a wonderful job with this loop poem! I enjoyed your graphic and felt that your poem flowed well from one stanza to another.
Keep writing I ng@
Comment Written 07-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Glad you liked the artwork too.
I know poetry should stand alone but I love to illustrate my work.
