Comment from Patrick Bernardy

Good

Hello!

I did want to let you know that it looks as if there are (14) syllables in this one, violating the prompt. You have plenty of time to fix that up, though, be the deadline.

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024

thanks I will fix it now

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

Good 13 syllable poem for the writing prompt. Nice entry. Thanks for sharing.

"Words can kill ... if you're doing it right."

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 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

thanks a lot I will join the club

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 13-syllable (14) poem, Friday the 13th, has an extra syllable, according to me, but otherwise shares the ominous feelings that the date evokes.
Fri-day-the-(thir-teenth) 5
Day-of-fear-and-dread 5
Death-ad-ja-cent 4

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

thanks i will check it further

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I always found out that worrying about the day is worse than the actual day. I've done it myself many times. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024

thanks a lot