Pumpkin Parade
From patch to playful picture...5 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Quite the strange faces on some of those pumpkins, but I guess that's what Halloween is about...strange and wide to scare and amuse. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Quite the strange faces on some of those pumpkins, but I guess that's what Halloween is about...strange and wide to scare and amuse. Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review, Carol! :-)
Comment from Katiemae1977
What a fine haiku like 5-7-5 for the contest. Check the word "orange" it may have 2 syllables which would give you 6 syllables in your first line
Otherwise it is a cute 5-7-5 and best wishes in the contest.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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What a fine haiku like 5-7-5 for the contest. Check the word "orange" it may have 2 syllables which would give you 6 syllables in your first line
Otherwise it is a cute 5-7-5 and best wishes in the contest.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review and heads-up, Katiemae!
Comment from royowen
What an inventive way of describing the favoured garments of autumn, this is most creative, autumn appears to be the end of the seasonal cycle, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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What an inventive way of describing the favoured garments of autumn, this is most creative, autumn appears to be the end of the seasonal cycle, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your positive review!!
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Most welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations on your milestone post! Beautifully done without referring either to Halloween or pumpkin and yet perfectly capturing the essence of the season with amusement and enhancing alliteration. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone post! Beautifully done without referring either to Halloween or pumpkin and yet perfectly capturing the essence of the season with amusement and enhancing alliteration. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Debbie!! And thank you for the wonderful review!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, I would agree with your Sartori line that says, odd October art it really is odd that each October we use pumpkins to show different geometric shapes on how we feel inside.
This is an excellent haiku although it doesn't claim to be it gives us the impression of being odd art.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Yes, I would agree with your Sartori line that says, odd October art it really is odd that each October we use pumpkins to show different geometric shapes on how we feel inside.
This is an excellent haiku although it doesn't claim to be it gives us the impression of being odd art.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you for reviewing my work.