inside the super bowl
what goes down can come up again5 total reviews
Comment from Esther Brown
Laughing and imagining: nothing like too much "scatole" in your poop from the Atkins diet. It all made sense until the Axe. Was that for the toilet shark? Or Dear Aunt Millie? I am imaging the toilet shark got her. Well done. Esther
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Laughing and imagining: nothing like too much "scatole" in your poop from the Atkins diet. It all made sense until the Axe. Was that for the toilet shark? Or Dear Aunt Millie? I am imaging the toilet shark got her. Well done. Esther
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
Comment from F. William Lester
Poor Aunt Millie. Those nasty little beasts do tend to reappear at the most inopportune times. Nothing we can do - but blame it on someone else. :)
I enjoyed the laugh, although "off color". Good luck in the contest.
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Poor Aunt Millie. Those nasty little beasts do tend to reappear at the most inopportune times. Nothing we can do - but blame it on someone else. :)
I enjoyed the laugh, although "off color". Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
This is a sh*tty entry, you're spewing cr*p from your a*s!
:-)
A great story for the prompt! You filled the brief perfectly. (Snort). By the way, a friend of mine with a similar issue told me a spatula works just fine. You don't need to get all melodramatic and use an axe...
:-D
At least you maintained *something* of FS tradition and included flowers...even if it was of the poo-pourri variety.
You have been and will remain one of my favorite writers, oh Mr. Anonymous, for your unapologetic irreverence. Now don't go all apesh*t over this amazing review.
Ok, I'll stop now and go bother someone else.
Fondly,
Julie
:-)
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This is a sh*tty entry, you're spewing cr*p from your a*s!
:-)
A great story for the prompt! You filled the brief perfectly. (Snort). By the way, a friend of mine with a similar issue told me a spatula works just fine. You don't need to get all melodramatic and use an axe...
:-D
At least you maintained *something* of FS tradition and included flowers...even if it was of the poo-pourri variety.
You have been and will remain one of my favorite writers, oh Mr. Anonymous, for your unapologetic irreverence. Now don't go all apesh*t over this amazing review.
Ok, I'll stop now and go bother someone else.
Fondly,
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from Kahlani
What a hilarious short story! It was unexpected, too, because the title and photograph gave no clue to what was to come. I love a good hearty laugh, and this story did it for me. Thank you for sharing it.
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What a hilarious short story! It was unexpected, too, because the title and photograph gave no clue to what was to come. I love a good hearty laugh, and this story did it for me. Thank you for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed this subtle and well worded little story, very clever as you describe a disturbance in the bathroom bringing up old waste product! Ha ha ha, a fun post, love Dolly x
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I enjoyed this subtle and well worded little story, very clever as you describe a disturbance in the bathroom bringing up old waste product! Ha ha ha, a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Oct-2024