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Definition of silence

definition of silence

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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I often wonder if I ever get the intended messages right from poems I read, but I guess, in truth, the words could often present a different meaning to everyone who reads them. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
    Well I wrote it with a rhyme, but then I realized it was a "free me" oh contest kind of thing, aka free verse.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Clear as mud, I am afraid. What are you trying to write about? let me know. I have you and your family have a good week. Halloween is almost here. Karen :-)

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024
    God knows, is free verse, sister:) I had to ditch the rhyme so now you are reading a "flawless poem":)
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 15-Oct-2024
    I get it now.

    Writers block destroys my soul
    The words fall through my fingers
    I hear no story in my head
    I type and absolute crap appears
    Nothing talks to me
    I hear no voices no story
    Alone, all alone :-)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I'm guessing this person is searching for an answer that never comes. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    You are so right in catching exactly what I wanted, thank you
Comment from royowen
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I like this rather ambiguous post Iza, I'm just amazed how far you've come as a writer, because I've seen your journey Iza, you are a star quality girl, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

Comment from Begin Again
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It seems the author is seeking an answer, and her inner self has doubts about what it will be or if she will find the answer. This doubt haunts her until she says it doesn't matter--what will be will be.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024

Comment from lyenochka
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I liked the ominous battle against the silence which is the "eternal troll". Perhaps the narrator is waiting for an answer that never comes.
Since this is a "free verse" contest, please edit to make it more free and don't end with rhymes as that would make it disqualified.

 Comment Written 13-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
    I am so in "rhyme" that is hard to drop free:) wanna read my blog?
reply by lyenochka on 13-Oct-2024
    Do you teach Romanian on your blog? 💖🎵
    La revedere!
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
    Noapte Buna, si nu. Scriu in romana ptr cei care nu stiu engleza:) Now to translate:) Good Night, and no. I write in romanian for the people that don't understand English. Have a good night
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2024
    I don't think so, but you can try to learn a word or two;) Noapte Buna, good night
reply by lyenochka on 13-Oct-2024
    I know that one. All the Buna words like dimineata, buna seara etc. 😊
reply by lyenochka on 13-Oct-2024
    I could almost guess the meaning! Romanian has 10% Russian words like vremia so that helps. The other 90% seems to be Latin based so knowing French and Spanish helps!
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2024
    Yup, you are so right.