Creation In Distress
but God offered redemption4 total reviews
Comment from TPAC
I like your topic, finding most people blaming Eve or the serpent: for upcoming harsh events in their lives. I believe our placement was that curse: wiping from us our past memory. Just my opinion.
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I like your topic, finding most people blaming Eve or the serpent: for upcoming harsh events in their lives. I believe our placement was that curse: wiping from us our past memory. Just my opinion.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2024
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
I absolutely love this poem. You have described in just a few short lines why we struggle as a society. Adam and Eve started it and now we continue to carry on the sin. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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I absolutely love this poem. You have described in just a few short lines why we struggle as a society. Adam and Eve started it and now we continue to carry on the sin. Good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 24-Oct-2024
Comment from Wendy G
Well done. Yes, creation is in great distress and is a mess, and is definitely awaiting its restoration. Unfortunately the original sin of wanting to be independent of God has tainted all mankind, and we are all guilty of the same. Excellent poem.
Wendy
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Well done. Yes, creation is in great distress and is a mess, and is definitely awaiting its restoration. Unfortunately the original sin of wanting to be independent of God has tainted all mankind, and we are all guilty of the same. Excellent poem.
Wendy
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024
Comment from zanya
;Adam's now behind a plow' a powerful statement and a very interesting angle on the 'What a mess ' prompt for the contest - humorous touch works well.
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;Adam's now behind a plow' a powerful statement and a very interesting angle on the 'What a mess ' prompt for the contest - humorous touch works well.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2024