Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Oh, I love the use of 'the layout of the land' and the 'layout of our lives' here, Sir Roy... and, oh man, doesn't life mirror a fen sometimes only to flip back to a desert at times... :-) Thanx so much for sharing! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024

Thanks Yvette, for these terrific comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

I enjoyed and appreciated your very well written poem. You show a definite and positive change in your life through your verse - how God put right with His salvation what had been wrong.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thanks Verna, for these clever comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from bob cullen

Excellent

Sorry, again out of sixes. Your rhyme always flows so comfortably together. Your experience as a quality poet shines yet again. Your work really does inspire me.

 Comment Written 16-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thanks Bob, for these fantastic comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Exceptional

Beautiful poem with a nice rhythm and also wisdom that can touch a petrified heart. I like these lines: "Yet God is never late to save, to rescue drowning men,
and yet he rescued this doomed man and led me through life's fen"

 Comment Written 15-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thanks Iza, for these fantastic comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from forestport12

Excellent

Yes, "Love and grace revealed her face...." And I learned what "Fen," means. And man's journey is only worthy if he finds light that reveals he was blind on his path.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Oct-2024

Thanks Stan, for these great comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this poem with us. God will love us and heal us. We just need to allow Him to do that. Where I struggle is I turn things over to God, then when He responds in His time, I tend to grab them back. I need to learn patience.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Barbara, for your terrific comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Beautifully rendering of God's loving power to heal us and transform us from our sinful paths. He did it for you and for me, and He continues to do the same each day. To God be the glory and the honor, now and forevermore. Beautifully presented verses.
RJ

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks RJ, for your excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by RJ Heritage on 14-Oct-2024

You're welcome
RJ

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

As I said earlier, God gave us all that we need, yet there are many trips and forbidden areas we must navigate. And when we fall, He's always there to pick us up.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Jim, for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

It is such a blessing to know that God never gives up on us, no matter how far we have gone astray he is still watching over us, and in his time he will bring us to a saving knowledge of him. He did the same for me and I am so grateful that he loves me that much. Patricia.

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Pat, for your generous comments and very kind review, blessings Roy

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

The Lord is always there waiting for us to accept him and know that He can remove all our worry and show us the light if only we turn to him and believe. I am happy that you found your way and now share your poems with us.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 14-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 14-Oct-2024

Thanks Carol for your terrific comments and lovely review, blessings Roy