One Breath
A poem about dandelions and wishes18 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Congratulations on the win, Brenda.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery.
-You capture the essence
of the picture very well.
-It was always fun to
wish on the dandelion."
-Your poem brings back fond memories.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
  |
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-Congratulations on the win, Brenda.
-You wrote a very good poem
with effective imagery.
-You capture the essence
of the picture very well.
-It was always fun to
wish on the dandelion."
-Your poem brings back fond memories.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
-
Hi, thank you for your wonderful review. I greatly appreciate it.
-
You are very welcome.
Comment from write hand blue
A great idea and appropriate picture. A simple idea with much achieved in so few words. Well done, a much deserved win. Well written and an entertaining read. Mel
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
|
A great idea and appropriate picture. A simple idea with much achieved in so few words. Well done, a much deserved win. Well written and an entertaining read. Mel
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
-
Thank you for your great
Review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A gorgeous photo for your winning 3-5-3 poem Brenda. I love the thought of blowing wishes with the dandelion seeds and sending them out into the world.
Congrats on the win Brenda, a lovely presentation.
cheers
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
|
A gorgeous photo for your winning 3-5-3 poem Brenda. I love the thought of blowing wishes with the dandelion seeds and sending them out into the world.
Congrats on the win Brenda, a lovely presentation.
cheers
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
-
Thank you for your great review.
Comment from karenina
Oh, m'gosh, I love this and voted for it!
Congratulations on the win, Brenda!
My grandson is ten now. When he was five we drive past a lawn full of dandelions gone to seed.
He exclaimed: "Look! A field of WISHES!"
Smiling....
Karenina
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
|
Oh, m'gosh, I love this and voted for it!
Congratulations on the win, Brenda!
My grandson is ten now. When he was five we drive past a lawn full of dandelions gone to seed.
He exclaimed: "Look! A field of WISHES!"
Smiling....
Karenina
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
-
Hi Karenina. Thank you for the great review and your vote. It is greatly appreciated. Love, Brenda
-
This one brought a smile!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, One Breath, has the proper formatting and sees then next generation of dandelions being given the breath of life which means everything to the little yellow buddings.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
|
This 3-5-3, One Breath, has the proper formatting and sees then next generation of dandelions being given the breath of life which means everything to the little yellow buddings.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
-
Thank you for the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh to see those dandelion seeds floating in the air again, alas the Autumn has set in and everything is dying. I enjoyed your wonderful post reminding me of spring, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
|
Oh to see those dandelion seeds floating in the air again, alas the Autumn has set in and everything is dying. I enjoyed your wonderful post reminding me of spring, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
-
Thank you.
Comment from Kahlani
As I was reading this, I imagined myself blowing on a dandelion and all the seeds floating in the air. I'm impressed with how you managed to convey so much in so few words. Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
|
As I was reading this, I imagined myself blowing on a dandelion and all the seeds floating in the air. I'm impressed with how you managed to convey so much in so few words. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
-
Thank you.
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah! I love this. First off this image is so cute!!!
Growing up we would always make wishes with these and when my kids were small they made wishes. Hey why do I not still make wishes with these!
Well done I think this will bring back lovely little memories for many readers!
I wrote a poem all about dandelion's recently , it is one of my poem books. 'Always Time for Rhyme' just in case you'd like to read it being a dandelion lover! Best of luck in the contest it's perfectly fitting for the air 3-5-3 prompt!
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
|
Ah! I love this. First off this image is so cute!!!
Growing up we would always make wishes with these and when my kids were small they made wishes. Hey why do I not still make wishes with these!
Well done I think this will bring back lovely little memories for many readers!
I wrote a poem all about dandelion's recently , it is one of my poem books. 'Always Time for Rhyme' just in case you'd like to read it being a dandelion lover! Best of luck in the contest it's perfectly fitting for the air 3-5-3 prompt!
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
-
Thank you
Comment from royowen
And who knows just where those seeds will fly this very day. They have a destiny and a purpose, and so do we, and who knows what the future holds for us, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
|
And who knows just where those seeds will fly this very day. They have a destiny and a purpose, and so do we, and who knows what the future holds for us, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
-
Thank you.
-
Pleasure
Comment from mermaids
Love this pic and your words are whimsical and so true. It only takes one breathe to scatter the dandelion seeds. Excellent 3-5-3 form and use of words that fits your cute fairy perfectly.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
|
Love this pic and your words are whimsical and so true. It only takes one breathe to scatter the dandelion seeds. Excellent 3-5-3 form and use of words that fits your cute fairy perfectly.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
-
Thank you.