Lingering Warmth
When there is but you and I . . .12 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
the soft touch of love drifting with a lover's breath that barely touches the skin -- doubt there is anything more sensual than that. A few words to hold together a lifetime of love.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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the soft touch of love drifting with a lover's breath that barely touches the skin -- doubt there is anything more sensual than that. A few words to hold together a lifetime of love.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thanks much for your review, Carol.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette.
That is an interesting picture. It is almost like an optical illusion. I had to move my head side to side to figure it out. Your poem gets right to the point. This is a good one.
Z
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Hey Yvette.
That is an interesting picture. It is almost like an optical illusion. I had to move my head side to side to figure it out. Your poem gets right to the point. This is a good one.
Z
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
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Thanx, Z -- not sure that 'sensual' is en vogue here anymore.... but maybe I'll give it another shot sometime :-) :-) Hope your day goes well... I'm off the store! ;) Yvette
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Hey Yvette.
I have no idea what is en vogue here anymore. It has changed since I left. My publisher told me rhyming/metered poetry doesn't sell anymore. I told them to recite 5 free verse poems to me. Then I told them I would recite 25 formalist/classical style poems back to them. They weren't interested. HAHAHAHAHA
Z
Comment from Dawn Munro
This, then, is a beautifully creative approach to this challenge. It's highly evocative too (*sigh* - lol). Here's wishing romance carries the contest and this wins. Good luck!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This, then, is a beautifully creative approach to this challenge. It's highly evocative too (*sigh* - lol). Here's wishing romance carries the contest and this wins. Good luck!
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your review, Dawn!!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Lingering Warmth, has the proper formatting and gives a positive squeeze on the idea that people are better off crowded together naked than not.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This 3-5-3, Lingering Warmth, has the proper formatting and gives a positive squeeze on the idea that people are better off crowded together naked than not.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you so very much for your time and your review, Bill!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a cosy and touching post with intimacy and romance intertwined in these words, a magical post filled with a silent mutual understanding, love Dolly x x x x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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This is a cosy and touching post with intimacy and romance intertwined in these words, a magical post filled with a silent mutual understanding, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your review today!
Comment from jake cosmos aller
hmm you took the prompt in another direction than expected. Well done, erotically charged poem but not too graphic expressing desire, love and lust in a short poem
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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hmm you took the prompt in another direction than expected. Well done, erotically charged poem but not too graphic expressing desire, love and lust in a short poem
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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My thanks for your thoughtful review here - greatly appreciated!
Comment from ESOSTINE
I feel the subtle passion behind this poem. The love that flows from a heart new and pure. Thanks for sharing your poem. Well done, dear, and goof luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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I feel the subtle passion behind this poem. The love that flows from a heart new and pure. Thanks for sharing your poem. Well done, dear, and goof luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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My thanks for your thoughtful and encouraging review today!!
Comment from Wendy G
A subtle suggestion of air within those soft gentle whispers. A very well presented 5-7-5, with words that complement the image vey well. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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A subtle suggestion of air within those soft gentle whispers. A very well presented 5-7-5, with words that complement the image vey well. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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My thanks for your thoughtful review today!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is beautiful! I love the way you've captured a moment with just a few words. The word choices are perfect. "Soft whispers" brushing against the skin shows such intimacy. Your ability to convey such emotion and imagary with so few words is so impressive.
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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This is beautiful! I love the way you've captured a moment with just a few words. The word choices are perfect. "Soft whispers" brushing against the skin shows such intimacy. Your ability to convey such emotion and imagary with so few words is so impressive.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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My thanks for your thoughtful and encouraging review today!!
Comment from kahpot
How beautiful, yes, the gentle caress from a lover's breath can be as sensual as love itself, a wonderful poem for this prompt, very well written and presented, best wishes****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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How beautiful, yes, the gentle caress from a lover's breath can be as sensual as love itself, a wonderful poem for this prompt, very well written and presented, best wishes****kahpot
Comment Written 16-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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My thanks for your thoughtful and encouraging review today!!