Closing In
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Comment from F. William Lester
Fifty-word flash fiction is difficult at best. You convey helplessness and desperation that is experienced by the reader. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
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Fifty-word flash fiction is difficult at best. You convey helplessness and desperation that is experienced by the reader. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from papa55mike
That's a nice piece of desperation. Instead of "Walls" closing in, try something more dreadful. Like spirits or demons. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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That's a nice piece of desperation. Instead of "Walls" closing in, try something more dreadful. Like spirits or demons. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thanks, I will look into maybe fixing it up. I do thank you for your review
Comment from Nicki.B
I have to say I'm really enjoying reading the 4
50 word flash story entries, they're all so different and really entertaining! This poem shouts out to me panic attack!! But I like the image you've chosen, the small window of light. Excellent, well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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I have to say I'm really enjoying reading the 4
50 word flash story entries, they're all so different and really entertaining! This poem shouts out to me panic attack!! But I like the image you've chosen, the small window of light. Excellent, well done.
Best Wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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Thank you for your heart warning review. It's been a while for me in writing again