Please Ma'am!
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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Aww poor Penny! You've cleverly infused the shortest of fictions with a note of poignancy and sweetness, well complemented with a lovely visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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Aww poor Penny! You've cleverly infused the shortest of fictions with a note of poignancy and sweetness, well complemented with a lovely visual. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from F. William Lester
Well done. I didn't know baby opossums were joeys. I learned something new. Fifty-word flash fiction is difficult at best, and you made good use of the fifty you had. Good luck in the contest.
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Well done. I didn't know baby opossums were joeys. I learned something new. Fifty-word flash fiction is difficult at best, and you made good use of the fifty you had. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
Comment from papa55mike
Opossums are among the greatest survivors on earth. We have loads of them in West Tennessee, visiting our garbage cans every night. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Opossums are among the greatest survivors on earth. We have loads of them in West Tennessee, visiting our garbage cans every night. What a wonderfully written story. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from moonsunrise
I enjoyed reading your delightful poem. I've never written a dribble poem. I will have to write one. I sure hope Penny the Possum received more next door.
Thanks for sharing!
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I enjoyed reading your delightful poem. I've never written a dribble poem. I will have to write one. I sure hope Penny the Possum received more next door.
Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
Comment from royowen
You must be an Aussie, how else would you know that Joeys need to be fed, but they usually give birth a few, I'm guessing, do they call American possum's young Joeys? Heh heh, but cleverly written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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You must be an Aussie, how else would you know that Joeys need to be fed, but they usually give birth a few, I'm guessing, do they call American possum's young Joeys? Heh heh, but cleverly written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2024
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I had to use Google to get the info but apparently both Aussie and US possums are called joeys. The things Fanstory can teach you!
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Wow, I never knew that, I do now, thank you