Tornado
A lost puppy finds a home.5 total reviews
Comment from Charles D Ezell
Good one, no doubt a winner. Nothing like a child and a puppy to bless the day. The photo is perfect. I tells the story. Best to you in the contest. No doubt a winner.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Good one, no doubt a winner. Nothing like a child and a puppy to bless the day. The photo is perfect. I tells the story. Best to you in the contest. No doubt a winner.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for the feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Comment from F. William Lester
Very nicely done. Fifty-word flash fiction is difficult at best, and you put together a complete plot in fifty words. Deftly written. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Very nicely done. Fifty-word flash fiction is difficult at best, and you put together a complete plot in fifty words. Deftly written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much for the honor of six stars. Deeply appreciated.
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My pleasure.
Comment from zanya
A tale to gladden the heart and lift weary spirits at this storm time of the year - a happy ending despite the destruction wreaked by the Tornado- great pic to illustrate.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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A tale to gladden the heart and lift weary spirits at this storm time of the year - a happy ending despite the destruction wreaked by the Tornado- great pic to illustrate.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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So please you enjoyed the write. Thanks for the feedback.
Comment from Kahlani
Do I take it that Windy now belongs to your family? It's a miracle that the little puppy survived such a devastating tornado. I think the uprooted tree saved her life.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Do I take it that Windy now belongs to your family? It's a miracle that the little puppy survived such a devastating tornado. I think the uprooted tree saved her life.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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No Windy does not. But got the idea from the latest storms. Thank you for the read and the feedback. You may be correct about the tree.
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
I don't bother entering these contests because I am WAY too wordy. I don't think I could get a full narrative into 50 words. I'm still introducing the first scene well past that! *laughs*
Anyway, you have the skill to do this. You have setting, character, and plot all down. You also have a climax and resolution. The inciting event is the first three words "The battering wind." You manage to say so much with your limited word count! I may have to give this a go sometime. Maybe I could make it work.
By the way, I LOVED that the rescued puppy was called "Windy." That's a nice touch. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Hello!
I don't bother entering these contests because I am WAY too wordy. I don't think I could get a full narrative into 50 words. I'm still introducing the first scene well past that! *laughs*
Anyway, you have the skill to do this. You have setting, character, and plot all down. You also have a climax and resolution. The inciting event is the first three words "The battering wind." You manage to say so much with your limited word count! I may have to give this a go sometime. Maybe I could make it work.
By the way, I LOVED that the rescued puppy was called "Windy." That's a nice touch. Well done! Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
Comment Written 18-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the carefully crafted review. Deeply appreciated. Encourage you to give it a try. May take some pruning at first, but I think you can do it.