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His Silence

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Why did a 14 year old boy murder his parents?

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Comment from BethShelby
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The is freaky. I'm wondering if Oliver wants someone so much younger as a replacement for his wife. I don't understand why she is so willing to go along with anything anyone suggests even when she isn't comfortable with
It. It seems she is the kind of person who would be easy to persuade not to leave is that is what these people want. I wonder why she is so upset with Noah being sick. Does she think they are try to get him away from the group? I 'll wait and find out in future posts.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Beth, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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Oliver wanting to leave the house and take her to dinner sounds so wrong in so many ways. He wants to eat steak while all his disciples have to survive on vegetables. He doesn't have her issued the common clothing. He rather threatened her when he found her in his room and has insisted she live in the other house next to him.

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is really moving up a gear now with Danielle and she's powerless to say no, it seems, to Oliver. Obviously, she needs to know more but I wonder if she's under his spell a little. As for Callum, he's definitely smitten. And Noah is in the dog-house!
"Well I moved here with your parent(s) ...." (no apostrophe)
Looking forward to reading more, Jacob. Many thanks Debbie

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Debbie, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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Things aren't looking too good for Noah. Looks like he's not wanting to play along and is in trouble. Oliver seems to be dating, or trying to date Danielle, which can't be heading anywhere good.

Thanks for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Rhonda, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from Begin Again
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Okay, so am I to guess that something has happened to Noah or else he is just being punished by being told to stay in his room. Every time you read a paragraph someone is doing something that isn't getting explained. Is it just me that doesn't trust these people at all>
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Carol, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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There's a mystery as to why Noah isn't at the table. I am concerned it may be because he spoke with Danielle. I do hope Callum sees through the Eve situation. Thank you for sharing.

Eve's sat next to him. (sat beside him)

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2024


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2024
    Thank you, Barbara, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.