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Truckin

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The left lane is for passing only

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Exceptional
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This is a really great chapter showing how Thurmon and his family feel about the danger he goes into every day as a trucker. Clyde hasn't killed anyone yet, but he could do it at any time.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024

Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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Hi Wayne,
Great story. This is the last chapter of your book, however I was able to pick-up on the jest of book. I found one sentence that doesn't make sense to me-Had Clyde seen the FBI interview that PBS aired he would have learned that they had narrowed the search his state:" Should there be a {to} in there?
Cecilia

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2024